☆ A LARGE CHANGE. ☆

[jazzjade]

I love the limo bit I LOLED at it xD

More Please

[ellen1575]

More please Amber, It is FANTASTIC

[NeverSayNever]

more please, just an observation, your chapters all sound like blurbs.

_{☆ I know, i do it so people start to think about what im asking/telling. ☆}

[WhatMakesYouBeautiful]

^moreee

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ Next post by me will be chapter 4. ☆}

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ CHAPTER 4:
Delilah brushed her hair from all the clowning around, and turned around to her Mum.
''Mum, im using the computer to check out the stores. I really want a large doll house made of glass, please.'' Delilah battered her eyelashes.
''Maybe, it really depends on the quality. If you find one, ill think about it.'' Sally winked, watching Delilah skip to her laptop.
''Mum! Mum! I found one. And its not such a big price, either!'' Delilah grinned.
''How much is it, darling?'' Sally approached the laptop slowly.
''$1500! Isn't that amazing?'' Delilah looked at her mum with hopeful eyes.
''Wow, i guess that is pretty good.. except. What's its quality like? Scroll down so i can see the photo.'' Sally told Delilah.
Sally schemed the picture. ''Hmm, it looks alright. Oh, and its from America. We can pick it up in two weeks.'' Sally smiled.
''Yay! Thanks Mum.'' Delilah hugged her Mum tightly.
''I can't believe im finally getting the doll house ive always dreamed off!'' Delilah yelled, hopping into the elevator and arriving on fifth floor where her bedroom was. ☆}

[Cat_101199]

wow really cheap

I love it more please

[NeverSayNever]

wow really cheap

I love it more please

_{☆ I just randomly thought of a number.
2 more people. :3 ☆}

[Cat_101199]

Is he like a form I can sighn to yet this like personally delivered to my inbox?

COMEONANDPOSTPEOPLE

[NeverSayNever]

Is he like a form I can sighn to yet this like personally delivered to my inbox?

COMEONANDPOSTPEOPLE

_{☆ Lol, idk. ☆}

[ellen1575]

Thats is amazing Amber.
I love reading your stories :]

Moree :]

[NeverSayNever]

Thats is amazing Amber.
I love reading your stories :]

Moree :]

_{☆ Haha, thankyou.
One more person ! ☆}

[koolcat666]

_{More please Amber}

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ Okay, next post by me is Chapter 5. ☆}

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ CHAPTER 5:
Delilah got up for school, and got dressed.
She went from fifth floor to first floor, like usual.
''Mum, today is the last day i make my breakfast and we go to Bali remeber! And today's my last day of school at this wreck.'' Delilah grinned.
''Yes dear, it is! Now, please make your breakfast darling.'' Sally smiled, drinking the usual coffee.
''Mum.. can i ask you something?'' Delilah said nervously.
''Yes Del, go ahead.'' Sally stood there, awaiting Delilah's question.
''Do you reckon, ill have friends in America?'' Delilah said this, like she was ashamed.
''Absoutely, honey! More friends then here. Everyone will love you for being an Australian.'' Sally hugged her. ''Now, remove them thoughts from your head.'' Sally laughed.
Delilah hugged her back, and laughed along with her. ''Okay, all gone.'' Delilah giggled. ☆}

[WhatMakesYouBeautiful]

^moree

[Alexandra4621]

Loving it!

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ Thanks Hayley & Alexandra. ☆}

[Alexandra4621]

I lold at the glass hpuse being $1500 anf her room fivestoreysbup.

[NeverSayNever]

I lold at the glass hpuse being $1500 anf her room fivestoreysbup.

_{☆ Lol. ☆}

[ellen1575]

That is fantastic
Moree:D :]

[NeverSayNever]

That is fantastic
Moree:D :]

_{☆ Ill do more tomorrow. ☆}

[koolcat666]

_{More Please (:}

[NeverSayNever]

_{☆ Ill do more tomorrow. ☆}

[Alexandra4621]

Gawd. Stupid ipod。()/