Writing Course.

[Random_Peace]

<sub>G'day Everyone :]

The purpose of this topic is too make you more enthusiastic about writing and reading stories.

This topic is just an average narrative/story writing class, only funner and online.

If you sign up, you will be expected to complete the assigned homework tasks [nothing too drastic].

Your work will be marked and the student I think has overall done the best job that current week will
win the 'Student of the Week' award.

If you do win the award, your work will be posted/published in the topic.

Grading:

A= Amazing. Well over the expected standard.
B= Brilliant. Over the expected standard.
C= Comfortable. The expected standard.
D= .... Below the expected standard.
E= ... Well below the expected standard.
F= ..... You didn't pass this grade.

Along with your grade, I will give you some tips and notes, to improve your writing next time.

To sign up just PM or post this form [filled out]

Name:
Age:
Writing Experience:
Notes:

Rate your experience out of ten.

Students:
- Georgia
- Kristy
- Caitlin
- Hayley
- Hayley
- Sarah
- Tayana
- Monique
- Maddy | 1
-Jess
- Sarah
- Emma | 1

P.S If you haven't completed your homework for 4+ weeks, you
will be scratched.

[Let me know if you're going away]

[bTips:[/b]

Tip 1:

Adjectives.
Describing words [adjectives] are the key thing to making
your story more interesting for the readers. Try making your
story as descriptive as possible.

Ex. The lion jumped over the bridge.

      The huge, fierce lion furiously jumped over the near-rotting bridge.


Tip 2

Fun
Make sure your always having fun while writing.
If your not enjoying yourself, than pick another
topic to write about or don't write at all.

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Theo


The occasional competition may be started.

Feedback is hugely appreciated.

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WEEK 2:

Mr. Men Stories

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WEEK 2:

STUDENT OF THE WEEK.

Appleev [Emma]

Mr men and little miss where getting ready for mr Bumps birthday!
they baked a cake, made a card, wrote a song and got a present.
little miss chaterbox was at mr Bumps house and talking about birthday's "i love birthdays they are so so so fun and i love planning party's its so great and me and all the other little miss's and other mr men are planning a surprise party for YOU"! she realized what she said and told mr bump he still had to look surprised.
on the party day mr bump turned up at the park to balloons and singing and dancing and a marvelous cake! everyone yelled "HAPPY BIRTHDAY SURPRISE"
and he ran to greet everyone but on the way he fell and "BUMP" his head hit the concrete everyone sighed "oh mr bump"

who let it slip there was a party?

The End! haha that was so hard. is that the kind of question you want?

Please feel free to share and and review
others and your stories.</sub>

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_{Feel free to share book reviews, your ideas and your stories.}

[Tuala_94]

LOL, this seems like fun.

Name: Kristy.
Age: 16.
Writing Experience: I roleplay..
Notes: Herp-derp.

[hanona]

 

[Tuala_94]

Derp.

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_{We will begin when we have one other student.}

[Tuala_94]

Kay

[Random_Peace]

^{I always get half way through writing a story then give up, and never finish it.}

[Tuala_94]

Haha same here.
May we start or do we really have to wait for another person?
I am uber bored. ;l

[PuppyLuv]

Name: Beth.
Age: 11.
Writing Experience: I wrote a story called "Believers and Deceivers." It isn't finished.
Notes: UJELLY?

[Random_Peace]

_{Great! :]
I'll be PMing this weeks homeowrk immediately.}

[Tuala_94]

Okay :DD

[hanona]

ok

[WhatMakesYouBeautiful]

^{meeh why not (:}

Name: Hayley
Age: 12
Writing Experience: A bit
Notes:Amazing ;P

[AquaPrincess13]

Name: Hayley
Age: 12
Writing Experience: I do lots of writing at school & I roleplay
Notes: I enjoy writing

[sarzz_96]

Name: Sarah
Age: 15
Writing Experience: I've done some Harry Potter fan-fictions, received top marks in my story writing assignments, enjoy writing very much.
Notes: Team Jacob or Edward? Neither, TEAM POTTER.

[Tuala_94]

Name: Sarah
Age: 15
Writing Experience: I've done some Harry Potter fan-fictions, received top marks in my story writing assignments, enjoy writing very much.
Notes: Team Jacob or Edward? Neither, TEAM POTTER.

TEAM TEMPLE!

[sarzz_96]

TEAM TEMPLE!

??

[Tuala_94]

You said you're Team Potter. I'm Team Temple.
[Le guy in my signature.]

[sarzz_96]

You said you're Team Potter. I'm Team Temple.
[Le guy in my signature.]

Ooooh; awesome :3

[xXxStarWinxXx]

I'm not sure if I can sign up but..
Name:Tayana
Age:10
Writing Experience:I have done writing at home and at school
Notes:Also good at drawing

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<sub>Sorry about this long wait, everyone.

Your WEEK 1 homework is being sent out, at the moment.

Thank you for signing up everyone who has

- Peace -</sub>

[mojojojo]

Name: Monique
Age:13
Writing Experience: A lot,I'm in the Gifted and Talented Programme for English and I have won a couple of awards for story writing.
Notes:I love writing.

[macca33]

Name: Maddy
Age:11
Writing Experience: Quite a bit- we have done writing at school for years and everyone thinks I'm quite talented.
Notes:

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<sub>WEEK 1:

Change these sentences into bigger and more exciting sentences.

1. The man was sick. [The weary, old man was extremely ill and tired]
2. The ball was behind the gate.
3. The flower was blossoming.
4. The lake was cold.
5. He lost his book.

Than, choose one of your exciting sentences and include it in a 150 word,
or less enticing short story


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Thanks, Monique and Maddy

- Peace -</sub>