Story... Down The Rabbit Hole

[ellen1575]

Well for school we have to write a similar version of Alice IN Wonderland.Like a modern/futer thing version
I might post it here when I am done with it
I have my plot sorta ready

One fine day in Modern England a young girl named Demi was found playing on her laptop when all of a sudden she saw a cat running around dressed in a top and pants, she went to go, to see where it went. When she saw it, the cat jumped in a hole[most likely a rabbit hole] She was very curious to see where the cat was going, so she jumped in. When she reached the bottom of the Rabbit whole she saw some unusual creatures and the place was not England, but a dark gloomy place. The thing that got her more curious was the fact that they called her Alice..

Just got that from the top of my head xD

[Alexandra4621]

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I like it!

[macca33]

Awesome.

[ellen1575]

Chapter 1.
On sunny morning, a young girl Demi was playing on her laptop sitting under a tall shady tree. All of a sudden she saw a huge shadow, she hid behind the tree to make sure it wont see her. When she saw it was just a cat, she came out from behind the tree and continued playing on her laptop. When her laptop ran out of battery she looked around, seeing that the cat was wearing a top and pants, while it was running away. Demi seemed very curious so she followed it. The cat finally stopped running and jumped in a rabbit hole. Demi was so curious that she decided to go in too. When she was falling she bumped her head on something and blacked out.

Really short but eh

[ellen1575]

more soon or tomorrow.. :]

[ellen1575]

Chapter 2.
When Demi woke up rubbing her eyes, she looked around her. Was she in England? she asked herself. All of a sudden she saw a unusual creature coming towards her. It was a Cat who was smiling, but was that possible? "Well I see you're back Alice!" the Cat who was smiling said."Who,what!?Cats can't talk and what...my name is not Alice!" Demi said confused. "What are you talking about Alice, I am a Cheshire Cat,of course I can talk, and you are Alice,clearly you must have bumped your head harder than I thought." The Cheshire Cat said. "What that is nonsense,My name is NOT Alice it is Demi. How can I get back home?". "Well I still think you are Alice,but if you really want to go home than ok,first you have to got to the queen of wonderland."The cheshire cat said while fading away. "Wait don't leave,where do I find her?!" Demi said while sitting down.

[ellen1575]

Chapter 3.
A couple minutes had past, Demi stood up brushing herself and then walking towards a beautiful garden. "Maybe the Queen or someone else could help me get home!" Demi said with confidence. She walked to the garden slowly until she noticed something "Huh?..that is odd, why are those followers taller than me?" Demi said confused about the height.


that is all i can do now xD

[Alexandra4621]

loving it!

[Gothgirl_6]

more!

[Beanie Master]

Great story so far!

BM