Horrible Halloween

[_Tegan_]

Once again not a true story but Halloween is almost here thought i would make a story.

PART 1 :
As usual on halloween me and my friends would go Trick or Treating. This Halloween we were meating at the Milk Bar 12 o'clock to get some lunch.
We go early as we spend most of the day out for Halloween and we always had a contest who would get the most we were coming home at 8:30 having dinner then watch some movies then just chill as we normally do.
Oh no im gonna be late the time was 11:50. I ran in the shower forgetting about breakfast got my bunny outfit on and ran to the milk bar.

To be continued...

[Gothgirl_6]

That sounds awesome!!

[_Tegan_]

That sounds awesome!!

Thanks !!

[Gothgirl_6]

your welcom.e just telling the truth.

[Gum_yin2]

more story plz

[pritty_kitty101]

Hello Tegan, I've read your story and I would just like to mention a few things..
It's more like a diary or blog entry but if you keep expanding it should sound even more awesome. For it to be a story, if someone is saying 'Oh no...blablablabla' make sure you use " and ", otherwise it won't look like speech. Furthermore, instead of 'me and my friends' say 'my friends & I'. Otherwise, the story won't flow properly and it will just seem amateur. With that aside, I think this story has the opportunity to grow and become incredibly awesome. The beginning just opens up so many paths for your story to grow and develop!
- Tal