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LoonyGirl
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Story: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:18:23 PM »
Here's a story I've been working on. (IF I WRITE MORE, JUST KEEP SCROLLING DOWN TO SEE THE OTHER PARTS)
PART ONE:
They chose me for the mission. Unlike other missions this was dangerous. At the time I didn't even know it let. No-one took my place or offered to tail along with me. I only joined and done as they asked to save my young sister. She is only seven and was taken my the other assassins. They call themselves WI. Bellia is my sister and I won't give up until I find her. The Black Assassins gave me two choices. One; Find and fail alone or Two; Join and get her back. Two was my only choice and I took it. I was given missions and one after another I done the deed. Now I must take on the biggest mission of all. Going right inside the WI head quaters. Doesn't sound bad? Your wrong. It's as tall as the sky. It's as big as three whales put together. My name is Kendra Scoutt and I'm apart of The Black Assassins.
I push the glass doors open, entering the white, pale office. I ignore my surroundings been in theis room a million times. I thump down onto a black leather chair, waiting for him to look up. Kye Jones the head of The Black Assassins, sits behind his desk reading. White hairs stick up from the sides of his head. He glances up, letting the book drop to the desk surface. "Kendra, welcome back. How did your latest mission go?" He greeted friendly. Always small chat, never getting to the point of things. I am always the one who must hurry these conversations up. "Well, I done what you asked and assassinated the chairman of the WI. Then I went on a lovely curise with Batman and Robin. We drank wine and ate from silver platters." I answer indifferently. A laugh escapes his lips and echcos through the walls. I cross my arms over my chest waiting. "I see, and how was the wine with Batman and Robin?" he laughs. I ignore his humor, and raise an eyebrow. "Enough talk I want the next mission so I can get Bellia from the WI base." I say. He nods grave and picks up a file, giving it to me. I open it to the first and only page. A picture of the WI base is stuck in the left corner of the page. "Mission?" I ask. He nods folding his hands under his chin. "Dangerous one too. Bellia is in there. You must do four things while in there. Save Bellia, save the other prisioners, kill the leader of WI and finally blow up the base. Find help you'll need it." He explains. Sounds dangerous but she'll be in there. "I'll get started then." I say. I rise from my chair and pace out of the office. I'm this close to my sister, and no-one will stand in my way or will stop me. Because if they do then the last thing they'll see and rememebr is me carrying out the final blow.
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Gothgirl_6
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:21:46 PM »
How did you write such an amazing story!!!!!!!!
I LVOE IT!!!
Put up more please!!
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LoonyGirl
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:23:32 PM »
thanks, I shall soon! I just practiced at home alot and I read alot too. I'm gald you like it
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:24:49 PM »
I don't like it....
I LOVE it!!!
What grade are you in and what level are you at your writing?
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:32:45 PM »
cool!
I'm in Grade6 and my writing is in year 7 - year 8
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LoonyGirl
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:37:44 PM »
awesome!
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Gothgirl_6
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:43:41 PM »
you should be an author!
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LoonyGirl
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:46:08 PM »
I've been thinking about been one acually but I don't know if I should. Some time you should show me how good you are at writing stories, I'd love to see how you write a story. (:
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November 12, 2011, 06:50:02 PM »
I'll write one later for ya.
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 06:51:56 PM »
Cool, that'll be awesome
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November 12, 2011, 06:53:02 PM »
I'll post it on monday.
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 07:00:34 PM »
Alrightly
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November 12, 2011, 07:02:48 PM »
hang on. I have a story in my room. I'll get it now.
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 07:04:13 PM »
Okay
cant wait to read it
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November 12, 2011, 07:20:22 PM »
Wow, you are quite a creative writer, well done! It's amazing!
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November 12, 2011, 07:22:56 PM »
damn it. i thought i posted the story.
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 07:27:35 PM »
Thank you
Maybe try and post it agai Gothgirl
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November 12, 2011, 07:33:41 PM »
i made a topic called white christmas
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Re: Story Preview: Black Assassins
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November 12, 2011, 07:38:56 PM »
cool i'll check it out
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November 12, 2011, 07:39:13 PM »
thanx
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November 12, 2011, 07:41:47 PM »
anytime, I'll start adding some more onto the story
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November 12, 2011, 08:17:23 PM »
PART TWO:
I slept restlessly that night. I pictured seeing Bellia running towards me. Her blonde hair swinging from side to side as she ran. I reach out to grab her hand but something jerks her back. She falls down backwards onto the soft grass, dead still. My scream escapes from my lips sending me awake. I'm covered in sweat feeling as hot as ever. I glance over to the clock and it's only 2 in the morning. early enough. For saftly reasons I have to sleep in a dorm at The Balck Assassins like everyone else. I know no-one will offer their help but someone out there will help me. I must find somone, anyone. I decide to get dressed in simple clothes and head out into the hall. Tall, built men dressed in black march past me, keeping their eyes away from mine. Guards. I could never do that, stay awake all night. But then again right now it doesn't sound so bad. I stroll down the hall quietly, making no sound. I push open two wide doors leading to the front, main room. A young woman sits behind a large, round desk, taking people's calls. She has redish hair tied back in a bun and red glasses at the tip of her nose. She peeks up to me and continues speaking on the phone. If she sees every assassin that works here everyday she must have a data base with their files. maybe I can look through them, see which assassin is willing to give me a hand in this mission. I take small steps towards the desk, resting my hands on the surface. She rasies her head up still on the phone. "Yes, yes. Alright talk to me later. I have some girl at my desk. See yeah." she says into the phone.
She places the phone down on top of a pile of papers. She looks back up to me waiting. "What is it you want?" she asks. I'm wasting her time, I see. "Hi, my name is Kendra Scoutt. I need to look into the data base with every assassin's file." I answer. She continues to look at me seeming bored and tierd of listening. "Why?" she asks. "Kye Jones himself has given me a mission. I need to do some screarching." I say. She nods rising from her chair. She digs in her pocket for her keys walking to a door at the very back. I stroll over to her waiting as she unlocks and opens the door. She gestures for me to go inside. I smile a thank you and walk inside. I glance back as she walks back to her desk. I look forward. One table and five chairs stand in the middle of the room. File cabinets after cabinets are set around the rooms. Still will take a while and I think waking up at 2 is luck. I just hope my luck stays until I get Bellia and finish my last ever mission.
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November 13, 2011, 02:28:25 PM »
PART THREE:
I spend hours going through file after file. So far it looks like no-one here is able to help me. Too weak, too scared, too stupid. I've read every file in every cabinet except one last one. I open it up wide, reaching in to pull out the files. I drop them onto the table, making a thud. I slide back into the wooden chair. I glance up to the clock near the door. Six in the morning, already. I drop my head onto the table, closing my eyes. So tired but I cannot sleep. Not now, when I can stay up and find help in these files. I raise my head slowly. The files are covered in dust, but not like others. No-one has checked these out in ages. But these must be of assassins who work here because they clean out the files of people who don't any more. I reach and grab onto the first file. I blow on it making the dust fly around. Some go up my nose making me sneeze. I wipe my nose, opening up the file. A small picture of a young girl. Black, long hair tied into a brade with a sour expression. Her name is Lilly Horn and she is fifteen. Same as me, lucky. I read through her file seeming more and more impressed. Skillful, brave and not as stupid. To my luck she does still works here. I get out a notepad and write her name down and her dorm number. I skip to the others now. I go through five others finding nothing but junk. I open another file seeing a young boy. Brown, hair and a soft expression. His name is Blake (no last name) and is fifteen. Skillful, blah, blah. All it goes on about how good he is. I write his name out and his dorm number down. I go through the other files, finally finishing at eight in the morning. Only two assassins I had found in all these cabinets. I shove the files back inside and grip my notepad to my chest. I cannot loose this. It's my only hope right now. I turn the door knob and walk out. The main room is filled with black suited people.
The lady behind the desk glances my way. "Found what you needed I hope." she says. I nod slowly. She smiles going back to work. I pace my way back to the hall. I first need to go to dorm 6B to find Lilly Horn. I pace my way to her dorm door. What if she doesn't accept? What if she isn't even here anymore? I shake myself. I need to stop thinking like this! I build up my courage and knock on the door. I hear a slight moan from inside. SHe must be busy but not too busy to answer the door I hope. The door slides open. The girl from the photo stands there. Lilly..it is her. She yawns patting her mouth. "Are you Lilly Horn?" I ask. "Yes and you are?" she asks. I take a deep breath. "My name is Kendra Scoutt, I need your help."
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