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Adam_the_Kat
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Unloved ©
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December 09, 2011, 04:17:32 PM »
Yet another story of mine, I guess. Have fun reading it.
NOTE: This story, as with all of mine, is not a pathetic goody-goody friendship story. I lost my idealism years ago. Yes, I am a cynic, not an idealist. And that is why I see the world in all it's glory - a wasteland deluded by the idiocy of religion, war and government. (And yes, I have... controversial opinions on just about everything.
I write to get my emotions out of my system. Because, this way, I hurt no-one but myself.
SECOND NOTE: Updates will be... sporadic at best. My computer is crashing around every five minutes, and I have had to keep resetting it. This also means that I can't be online long (fortunately, Firefox has an add-on that restores everything posted in a message box).
Chapter Listing:
Prologue:
Reply #0
Chapter 1 - Childhood:
Reply #36
Chapter 2 - Intelligence:
Reply #64
Chapter 3 - Never Good Enough:
Reply #75
Chapter 4 - The First Day:
Reply #113
Chapter 5 - The Idiotic School:
Reply #189
Prologue - The Early Years:
"No-one understands the alone; the loners. The world thinks that they are freaks - after all, who delights in solitude? But the world doesn't see the inside of people. They don't see that maybe they don't want to be alone. They might want company and friendship as much as the next man. But the idiots of the world seem to care as much about the alone as they do about lethal animals. In fact, lethal animals are quite like the alone. Lethal animals stay away from others because they are, well, lethal. Loners might stay alone for many reasons. A complete lack of social skills, for one. An abrasive personality. A fear of people. A fear of interaction with people. The only thing that matters to the world is that they are alone - where the freaks deserve to be. For the world agrees with people like Vernon Dursley of Harry Potter."
- Adam_the_Kat
There was once a young boy. He lived with his mum, dad, and he had no siblings. He had a good life. His parents loved him, they were always proud of him, and they were always attentive to what he needed.
But then the boy’s sister came into the world.
His parents started to focus more on the sister than on him. The boy didn’t realise, and for a few years all was well. The boy did well at school, the sister was happy, the parents were happy, and the boy was happy.
And then the parents got a horse.
The boy happened to be allergic to horses, and thus couldn’t join in with them. Also, he found horses boring. The boy thought who, honestly, wanted to spend thousands of dollars on food, housing, equipment and so on, for an animal that can’t talk to humans and spends most of their time eating and sleeping?
Obviously the other members of his family did.
The horse started to become more and more important to the sister and the mother. This time, the boy did not delude himself that he was still equally loved. It was obvious to the boy that his mum loved the horse more than him, and by extension she loved his sister more than him – because she actually liked the horses.
And that is when the boy started hating the world.
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 04:45:28 PM »
I think that the best stories are from emotion otherwise they are a waste of time, from my point of view.
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:00:03 PM »
Agreed. That is why I write this way, and don't write the idiotic "love" stories, where a twelve year old falls in love with another twelve year old and they magically stay in love for years to come, or where a friend doesn't want to be friends and then magically wants to be friends again.
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December 09, 2011, 05:01:16 PM »
Quote from: Adam_the_Kat on December 09, 2011, 05:00:03 PM
Agreed. That is why I write this way, and don't write the idiotic "love" stories, where a twelve year old falls in love with another twelve year old and they magically stay in love for years to come, or where a friend doesn't want to be friends and then magically wants to be friends again.
Yeah.
I haven't really wrote a proper love story but I only like it if it's like, life related.
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December 09, 2011, 05:16:09 PM »
I know what you mean. I, quite honestly, get sick of all of the love stories on here. At times, it seems like that this board is dead except for the love stories.
Technically, I actually have the most popular story on here that is still on here and hasn't had all of it's writing taken down. And I am an atrocious writer.
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December 09, 2011, 05:22:39 PM »
Yeah
Personally, I think your stories are the best.
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:28:28 PM »
Cool ^^
Usually, when I do stories, this is what happens;
I should finish that story. Nahh. Can't be bothered.
Then I either start a new one or make up a Personality Core.
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December 09, 2011, 05:31:36 PM »
Ha. Yeah
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:33:46 PM »
Quote from: Gothgirl_6 on December 09, 2011, 05:22:39 PM
Yeah
Personally, I think your stories are the best.
Thanks.
I'm not a very good writer, though - honest!
Quote from: PuppyLuv on December 09, 2011, 05:28:28 PM
Cool ^^
Usually, when I do stories, this is what happens;
I should finish that story. Nahh. Can't be bothered.
Then I either start a new one or make up a Personality Core.
Apparently, Beth, there are entire fandoms devoted to the relationships between the Cores (Factosity, for example).
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:35:18 PM »
Quote from: Adam_the_Kat on December 09, 2011, 05:33:46 PM
Thanks.
I'm not a very good writer, though - honest!
You've got to be kidding? You're AWESOME!
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:38:01 PM »
Fact x GLaDOS...
My friends and I made up Rick's hat x Space xD
I made up one. Sanity Core :3
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:40:34 PM »
Quote from: Gothgirl_6 on December 09, 2011, 05:35:18 PM
You've got to be kidding? You're AWESOME!
I write for two reasons.
One: This forum has a distinct lack of good literature. All of the best stories are incomplete, too. When I can't finish a story, I at least come up with an excuse to both end it and be able to restart it.
Two: As an outlet for my emotions. Like artists paint what they think, I write what I feel. You can literally tell what mood I'm in by what is posted.
And I guess that I won't be able to convince you that I'm not a good writer.
Quote from: PuppyLuv on December 09, 2011, 05:38:01 PM
Fact x GLaDOS...
My friends and I made up Rick's hat x Space xD
I made up one. Sanity Core :3
Heaven knows that Aperture Science needs the last one. With a psychopathic computer equipped with deadly neurotoxin (what idiot gave a homicidal AI neurotoxin anyway?) and a science-mad CEO who died of moon rock poisoning...
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:42:04 PM »
Quote from: Adam_the_Kat on December 09, 2011, 05:40:34 PM
I write for two reasons.
One: This forum has a distinct lack of good literature. All of the best stories are incomplete, too. When I can't finish a story, I at least come up with an excuse to both end it and be able to restart it.
Two: As an outlet for my emotions. Like artists paint what they think, I write what I feel. You can literally tell what mood I'm in by what is posted.
And I guess that I won't be able to convince you that I'm not a good writer.
Nice reasons but I still think you're great
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Re: Unloved
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December 09, 2011, 05:43:13 PM »
Thanks.
But what happened to "awesome"?
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December 09, 2011, 06:01:04 PM »
Sorry, my bad. ~clears throat~
Nice reasons but I still think you're AWESOME!
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December 09, 2011, 06:07:26 PM »
Much better.
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You're welcome sweetie. Hah lol
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December 09, 2011, 06:10:08 PM »
Adam/Kaiba? Slight match.
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Quote from: PuppyLuv on December 09, 2011, 06:10:08 PM
Adam/Kaiba? Slight match.
-_-
Beth/Misha Collins?
Zero Match.
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Whatever.
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Just kidding.
How's life?
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December 09, 2011, 06:31:11 PM »
I like trains. :3
Nice story, Adam. The Queen of Everything approves.
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December 09, 2011, 06:32:13 PM »
Caauuusseeee
thisismyunitedstatesofWHATEVER
I'm fine.
Just looking through some Portal stuff on dA
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nice story adam
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Quote from: Mr. Tambourine Man. on December 09, 2011, 06:31:11 PM
I like trains. :3
Nice story, Adam. The Queen of Everything approves.
I like trains too.
Thanks.
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