No name story.

[pakmak]

This is how it goes.
Chapter 1
Burning flames, rock and rubble.

The house before me was blazing in flames. It had one been mine, where my family and I lived. But that was then. When it had strong walls and a sturdy roof. Like I said. Then, not now. I stood outside of it, watching the flames rise higher and higher while the fire brigade fought furiously trying to control it. There were six fire trucks and an ambulance that had just left with my mum and my brother.
My dad and I were standing on the gravel road in our pyjamas watching our house we lived in for years burn into rubble on the ground. The whole street was outside the house talking quietly to my dad. They were talking quietly, but I could still hear the tears in their voice. I felt tears fall slowly down my face. I sat down in the middle of the road, thinking about how our family had had great times in that house. Christmas, Easter...


More coming soon.

[Adam_the_Kat]

<sub>I like it. Even though it is sad.

I want more!</sub>

[bubblefairy]

Tragic beginnings sometimes turn into a wonderful ending...
Well done!

[pakmak]

^{Thanks. Writing more now.}

[Gothgirl_6]

I agree with Adam and bubblefairy.

Very intriguing

[appleefv]

this is great!  i want more....