I need a helper who loves giving advice and LIKES/LOVES Writing stries *RESULTS*

[deanne]

THanks to everyone who put fourth there entry!
All the Chapters were great and I enjoyed reading them immensly!
Sadly, I can't give everyone a place so I decided that the winner is....
bear44! Congrat bear! lease cheak your PM's!

I am going to start a topic called, "Writing Tips" but I want another person with me too. In case I am offline & you need the answer desperetly.

POEPLE, YOU NEED TO PM THE FORM TO ME OR IT DOSEN'T COUNT!

If you are interested in this 'job' please read the rules and PM the form to me. ANY FORMS LEFT IN COMMENTS WILL NOT BE ACCEPTED

Rules
* You have to be able to write a story. If you can't write a story then how can you give others tips?
* You must be aged 10 and over.
* You MUST be willing to send a chapter of a story in your entry (so i can see how advanced you are!)
* You must be willing to ask my help or guidence if you are stuck on a question.
* You also must have patience to explain someting to a person if they don't udnerstand.
* You must be able to use simple explaining launge when explaing something to someone.
* You also MUST BE PREPARED TO RUN THE TOPIC BY YOURSELF IF I GO AWAY ON CAMP OR SOMETHING

Now that you have read my rules please fill out this form:
if you leave anything out on the form WITHOUT asking me first it will be deleted

Form Name:
Nickname/ what you want to be called:
Age:
Gurl or Guy:
How long have you written stories for?:
Do you like reading:
Why/ why not:
Are you usally good-tempered and cheerful & ready to give advice at any moment? (LOL):
Please insert a chapter of a story here:

Please PM your forms to me by 10th April which means you have 2 days. I may extend the deadline if I don't get many entries.

BTW, If you have a better title for this topic please tell me.
BTW, This topic will be deleted when I choose an assistant.

My promise to you
I promise this is NOT a 'riged' Entry.
I will get everyone a fair chance.
I will also be udnerstanding if you PM me your form and then do not want to have the 'job' anymore.
This is my Promise to you.




OKAY THEN!
Have fun entering!
Deanne

[citcat277]

i do not get it is it an advice collum that u want to be in or is it a wrighting storys?

[deanne]

i do not get it is it an advice collum that u want to be in or is it a wrighting storys?

What it is, is that you give WRITING TIPS to people.
Writing Advice.
Whatever you wanna call it!

[citcat277]

because u r asking if people like writing storys and if they will right a chapter of a story

[blazeblue]

i am gonna enter!

[InTheClouds]

I've pmed my details to you! 

[alivas]

Im turning 10 in may but i got a b+ in writing and reading so can i have the job! please

i can make sigs avies blingee word art powerpoint any thing please can i have the job!

would you like me to write a story for you

[blazeblue]

this colum thing seems fun

[deanne]

Im turning 10 in may but i got a b+ in writing and reading so can i have the job! please

i can make sigs avies blingee word art powerpoint any thing please can i have the job!

would you like me to write a story for you

if your turning 10 this year thats fine fill out the fourm and PM it to me.

OTHER PEOPLE WHO HAVE PUT THE FORM IN A COMMENT PM IT TO ME OTHERWISE IT DOSEN'T COUNT!

[citcat277]

for the chapter of a story do we make one up ?

[deanne]

for the chapter of a story do we make one up ?

Yes

[citcat277]

well is tere a topic or do we just make  one up out of no were starting chapter what i am confused why do we need a chapter again

[InTheClouds]

Because Deanne wants to see how good we are at writing. 

[citcat277]

yeah but i do not know if i can wright a whole chapter of writing if u think about it it is like 4 -5 pages of wrighting

[deanne]

well is tere a topic or do we just make  one up out of no were starting chapter what i am confused why do we need a chapter again

Citcat, dose not matter if it is 25 pages. as long as it is writing of at least a paragroph that U wrote.
PM it to me.
(txs bear for explaining)

[InTheClouds]

np Deanne 

[deanne]

np Deanne 

[Laylabug]

Nickname/ what you want to be called: *Toodee*
Age:12
Gurl or Guy:girl
How long have you written stories for?:since kindy. 5 years ago
Do you like reading:Of course
Why/ why not:Mmm-mm I dunno
Are you usally good-tempered and cheerful & ready to give advice at any moment? (LOL):I'm short-tempered and I don't have any dictianaries or thesaurases
Please insert a chapter of a story hereMy stories have bits of language and stuff....

My Heart It Beats Only For You-A Paramore/MyChemicalRomance fanfic
Junior High.
Hi. My name is Jordyn and I ma 14.
I look like Hayley Williams just with black streaks and hazel eyes.
I guess you could say we're "twins"
But I'm also Australian but moved to America
I might as well start the story...

As a yellow bus came to our house, I knew I had to rush.
I swallowed my last piece of toast, turned off the TV and grabbed my bag.
It was 7th grade. A new year at a new school. I became nervous and buterflies came into my stomach.
I chugged down a glass of apple juice and ran out the door.

There were a million kids or something on this bus. Some were little kindergarteners who were crying out for their mummies, some were 12-graders who were talking about...oh...let's say "adukts only" stuff, okay?
I decided to sit with a girl with red hair and sparkly green eyes. "Wow! You're a new 7-th grader, aren't you?" she asked. "Um...yeah. I'm Jordyn Glenn."
"Hayley Williams. So nice to meet you."
HSe shook my hand "So, lead singer of Paramore?"
"Yes. How'd you know?"
"Um...band smarts. Friends, y'know?"
Hayley laughe. "I'm not that funny."
"Hayley!" called a boy. He ran up to Hayley and me. "Oh, I see you've got a bus buy. Anyway, I;m sitting with Zac." said the boy "OK, Josh."
"Josh Farro?" I asked "Yes!" clapped Hayley.
She's like an Alice Cullen, happy as a kitten playing with yarn.

We finally got to school.
I noticed...My Chemical Romance pass by me at lunch.
They sat at a table with 5 chairs. "Hey, notice her?" asked Mikey
Gerard looked at me. I turned away. "Yeah," answered Gerard
"She's pretty cute," said Mikey, a little too loud so all the girls started giggling and was like "OMG! e noticed me!!!!"
"Well ask her out, dammit!" growled Gerard.
"Pfft! As if!" "You said she was cute! Perv!" said Gerard.
I decided to get Gee's attention--or atleast Mikey's--so I walked over behind Mikey's chair and pulled it when he was not expecting it. He fell on his butt, and everyone started laughing.
"Whoops, sorry." I lied.
"Uh..it's no prob," said Mikey.
Hayley laughed the miost - she even fell off her chair!
I helped her up.
Josh stared at me. "Stop-giving-me-the-death-glare..." I growled
"Sorry," he blushed.


I just copied-pasted it off my Mibba account.

[deanne]

Nickname/ what you want to be called: *Toodee*
Age:12
Gurl or Guy:girl
How long have you written stories for?:since kindy. 5 years ago
Do you like reading:Of course
Why/ why not:Mmm-mm I dunno
Are you usally good-tempered and cheerful & ready to give advice at any moment? (LOL):I'm short-tempered and I don't have any dictianaries or thesaurases
Please insert a chapter of a story hereMy stories have bits of language and stuff....

My Heart It Beats Only For You-A Paramore/MyChemicalRomance fanfic
Junior High.
Hi. My name is Jordyn and I ma 14.
I look like Hayley Williams just with black streaks and hazel eyes.
I guess you could say we're "twins"
But I'm also Australian but moved to America
I might as well start the story...

As a yellow bus came to our house, I knew I had to rush.
I swallowed my last piece of toast, turned off the TV and grabbed my bag.
It was 7th grade. A new year at a new school. I became nervous and buterflies came into my stomach.
I chugged down a glass of apple juice and ran out the door.

There were a million kids or something on this bus. Some were little kindergarteners who were crying out for their mummies, some were 12-graders who were talking about...oh...let's say "adukts only" stuff, okay?
I decided to sit with a girl with red hair and sparkly green eyes. "Wow! You're a new 7-th grader, aren't you?" she asked. "Um...yeah. I'm Jordyn Glenn."
"Hayley Williams. So nice to meet you."
HSe shook my hand "So, lead singer of Paramore?"
"Yes. How'd you know?"
"Um...band smarts. Friends, y'know?"
Hayley laughe. "I'm not that funny."
"Hayley!" called a boy. He ran up to Hayley and me. "Oh, I see you've got a bus buy. Anyway, I;m sitting with Zac." said the boy "OK, Josh."
"Josh Farro?" I asked "Yes!" clapped Hayley.
She's like an Alice Cullen, happy as a kitten playing with yarn.

We finally got to school.
I noticed...My Chemical Romance pass by me at lunch.
They sat at a table with 5 chairs. "Hey, notice her?" asked Mikey
Gerard looked at me. I turned away. "Yeah," answered Gerard
"She's pretty cute," said Mikey, a little too loud so all the girls started giggling and was like "OMG! e noticed me!!!!"
"Well ask her out, dammit!" growled Gerard.
"Pfft! As if!" "You said she was cute! Perv!" said Gerard.
I decided to get Gee's attention--or atleast Mikey's--so I walked over behind Mikey's chair and pulled it when he was not expecting it. He fell on his butt, and everyone started laughing.
"Whoops, sorry." I lied.
"Uh..it's no prob," said Mikey.
Hayley laughed the miost - she even fell off her chair!
I helped her up.
Josh stared at me. "Stop-giving-me-the-death-glare..." I growled
"Sorry," he blushed.


I just copied-pasted it off my Mibba account.

PM it to me orit dosen't count.

[citcat277]

lol i pm'd mine to u

[Laylabug]

Deanne I pmed youuu

[citcat277]

cool  will we find out by the end of today

[deanne]

cool  will we find out by the end of today

sure will!

[citcat277]

 around about when like how long from now

[deanne]

around about when like how long from now

5=10mins