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Author Topic: My story 'Silver Knife' (Copyrighted)  (Read 2801 times)
I_Want_to_Be_a_VAMPiRE
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« on: January 18, 2010, 02:08:05 PM »
Heeeey Guys. I will not be posting my story here any more. PM me if you want more of the story on my other story that I am writing 'Blood Tipped Angel.'
Thanks

Tahlia.




 

 
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« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 02:26:18 PM »
The blurb is great! I love it!
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« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 02:27:07 PM »
Thanks.
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« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 03:05:00 PM »
I LOVE THE BLURB!

It made me want to read heaps more!



Please keep writing! =D
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« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2010, 03:06:00 PM »
Thanjks Dee... xD
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« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2010, 03:07:44 PM »
Thats ok. xD
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« Reply #6 on: January 18, 2010, 03:09:05 PM »
Lol adding more.
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« Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 03:09:28 PM »
Yay! Cheesy
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« Reply #8 on: January 18, 2010, 03:22:04 PM »
Posted!
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« Reply #9 on: January 18, 2010, 03:28:24 PM »
AMAZING! =D =D
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« Reply #10 on: January 18, 2010, 05:44:26 PM »
Yo, Thanks dee, haven't written more though. You the only person who likes my storys. And I wouldn't have gone though wif it if it wasn't for you dee.. Thanks!
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« Reply #11 on: January 18, 2010, 05:50:24 PM »
I don't know why anyone else doesn't like your story. D: Itsawesome!
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« Reply #12 on: January 18, 2010, 05:51:36 PM »
Thanks Dee...
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« Reply #13 on: January 18, 2010, 05:53:29 PM »
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« Reply #14 on: January 18, 2010, 05:59:21 PM »
That's a really good start Smiley
It's a bit hard to pick a name already, it's a bit too early.
The only thing I can really think of is 'Silver Knife' but because it's so early in the story it's difficult for a name.
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« Reply #15 on: January 18, 2010, 06:01:31 PM »
aweshum story.
you can call it.....i dunno yet. you need ta write more. (:
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« Reply #16 on: January 18, 2010, 06:09:36 PM »
OMG its amazing. i love it. would totally buy it!!!! ummm for the name i was thinking 'I love you taylei' its ok if u dont like if
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« Reply #17 on: January 19, 2010, 09:41:44 AM »
I like Silver Knife, cuz it has alot to do with knifes. And Also I love you Taylei.  There Awesome, Written more and will post more.
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« Reply #18 on: January 19, 2010, 09:44:09 AM »
Quote from: I_Want_to_Be_a_VAMPiRE on January 18, 2010, 02:08:05 PM
I did the blurb -

I starred into the face of an angel.
My girlfriend lay asleep, perfect beautiful and almost regreting this, I whispered "I love you Taylei."
And pulled the big silver knife from my jacket, and raised it high above my head and sobbed, "But I have to do this," and forced it down towards her.

Chapter one -

Waking to a bright day, my worries from the night before seemed feeble. I couldn't feel it but something had changed inside of me. I climbed from my bed and got ready for the day ahead.
  "Morning Evra!" Mum greeted me.
  "Hey Mum!" I said sarcasticly. I smiled but she frowned.
I walked to get my breakfast from her but she said, "Make your own."
So I made my own, ate it, and headed out the door to school.

  "Hey Evra!" Joany Maclaren greeted me.
  "Hi Jo. Wazza girl?" I said, sounding like a gangsta.
She giggled. She liked me since grade three.
  "I need you to meet a friend, her name is Taylei." She ran off and came back with a beautiful girl. Brown hair, green eyes and tanned.
  "Hello..Hi." I stammed. She giggled.
Then all of a sudden someone push her... towards me.

Thanks!

Tahlia Von xx
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you are so talented!
I love the story!!!
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« Reply #19 on: January 19, 2010, 09:44:58 AM »
Thanks.
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« Reply #20 on: January 19, 2010, 09:47:46 AM »
its awesome!
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« Reply #21 on: January 19, 2010, 09:48:54 AM »
Typing more. I'm going to have short chapter, but don't worry the story won't be short.
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« Reply #22 on: January 19, 2010, 09:56:14 AM »
Written more, check it out.  Tongue
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« Reply #23 on: January 19, 2010, 10:00:30 AM »
WRITE MORE! it is addicting.
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« Reply #24 on: January 19, 2010, 10:09:09 AM »
Also feel free to talk about whatever I want to keep it alive, even ask me Questions!  Tongue
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