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Question: What do you think my story is gunna be like?
Really good with lots of deatail. - 3 (30%)
Alright. - 2 (20%)
Not very good. - 1 (10%)
The BEST story ever! - 1 (10%)
An 'on edge' type of story. - 3 (30%)
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« on: February 06, 2010, 07:49:55 PM »
Well since everyone else is writing a story and BM made a story board I thought I'd write one. =]
I haven't got very far, at all. But here's the blurb;

Blurb;
Loud screams of terror and panic filled the room. "Get down! Get down on the floor!" He shouted, holing his gun in the air, 9 Milli meter. His voice as rough as sandpaper. Mickey was crouched under the table with a few of her other friends, shaking with fright. 'BANG, BANG!' Two shots were fired. Mickey closed her eyes tight, grenched her teeth, folded up her fists, pray that this nightmare would be over as quick as it came. When she opened her eyes she saw it. Couldn't believe it. Her eyes filled up with tears, it was the worst feeling that she had ever felt...


~ Chapter 1, Birthday Girl ~
coming soon!


So what do you guys think.
My story also needs a name so any suggestions would be appreciated.  =]  
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« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 07:54:14 PM »
OMG that was so good even my heart was beaping rapidly because it was scaring me
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« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 07:55:10 PM »
Quote from: beanie  love on February 06, 2010, 07:54:14 PM
OMG that was so good even my heart was beaping rapidly because it was scaring me
Really!?!  =D
Thanks! I'll write some more soon.
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« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2010, 08:18:40 PM »
It is great!
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« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2010, 08:31:12 PM »
Quote from: natbear on February 06, 2010, 08:18:40 PM
It is great!
Thanks!
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« Reply #5 on: February 06, 2010, 08:45:48 PM »
That is the most heart frightening text I've ever read!
Loveee it!
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« Reply #6 on: February 06, 2010, 08:58:28 PM »
 Cheesy
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« Reply #7 on: February 06, 2010, 09:17:02 PM »
scary,keep writting
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« Reply #8 on: February 07, 2010, 09:36:20 AM »
Quote from: Alexandra4621 on February 06, 2010, 08:45:48 PM
That is the most heart frightening text I've ever read!
Loveee it!
Wow, thanks!  =D
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« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2010, 09:36:49 AM »
Quote from: beanie  love on February 06, 2010, 08:58:28 PM
Cheesy
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« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2010, 09:38:25 AM »
Quote from: bambi_2173 on February 06, 2010, 09:17:02 PM
scary,keep writting
Yeah, it is a bit scary.
Thanks!  =D
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« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2010, 09:38:41 AM »
Thats fabulous Jody, please write more!<3

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« Reply #12 on: February 07, 2010, 09:39:55 AM »
Quote from: macca33 on February 07, 2010, 09:38:41 AM
Thats fabulous Jody, please write more!<3

xxMaddy
Thankyou. I will. =D
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« Reply #13 on: February 07, 2010, 09:46:02 AM »
for a name

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« Reply #14 on: February 07, 2010, 09:48:15 AM »
more please
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« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2010, 09:48:52 AM »
Quote from: beanie  love on February 07, 2010, 09:46:02 AM
for a name

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Oh yeah, a name.  =P
Great suggestion, I'll keep it in mind.  =D
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« Reply #16 on: February 07, 2010, 09:49:27 AM »
Quote from: I_Want_to_Be_a_VAMPiRE on February 07, 2010, 09:48:15 AM
more please

=D
I'll write some more a bit later today.
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« Reply #17 on: February 07, 2010, 10:28:41 AM »
Oh, no problem. I'm so excited to hear more...

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« Reply #18 on: February 07, 2010, 10:56:12 AM »
SWEET that is what it was like  Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin
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« Reply #19 on: February 07, 2010, 11:37:20 AM »
Quote from: macca33 on February 07, 2010, 10:28:41 AM
Oh, no problem. I'm so excited to hear more...

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Awesome.  =D
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« Reply #20 on: February 07, 2010, 11:39:02 AM »
Quote from: EmilyMc on February 07, 2010, 10:56:12 AM
SWEET that is what it was like  Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin
Thankyou!  =D
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« Reply #21 on: February 07, 2010, 03:41:27 PM »
Quote from: jodyb on February 07, 2010, 09:48:52 AM
Oh yeah, a name.  =P
Great suggestion, I'll keep it in mind.  =D
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« Reply #22 on: February 07, 2010, 03:57:55 PM »
Quote from: beanie  love on February 07, 2010, 03:41:27 PM
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« Reply #23 on: February 07, 2010, 04:23:50 PM »
WHOA thats awesome!
I was gripping the mouse so hard!!
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I really need you guys to understand: its nothing personal, it’s a new chapter in my life. I won't forget about you guys, I'm just going to turn the page. Maybe use a new colour pen to write with; and I'll be merrily on my way.
goodbye.
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« Reply #24 on: February 07, 2010, 04:58:21 PM »
Quote from: deanne on February 07, 2010, 04:23:50 PM
WHOA thats awesome!
I was gripping the mouse so hard!!
Thanks!
lolz  =D
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