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Dark Life/ Dark changes: Blurb: Nadia looked outside the window. It was a dark gloomy day,the sun was hidden behind the dark grey clouds. Nadia Tornur has a secret, a dark secret that only her friends and family know about. She was a vampire. If anyone found out, nothing would ever be the same. C H A P T E R O N E "Nadia, get up" yelled her mum from the front room. Nadia slowly got out of bed. She walked over to the window. Nadia looked out the window. It was a dark gloomy day, the sun was hidden behind the dark grey clouds. Perfect Nadia thought to herself. She quickly got dressed for school, then grabbed her bag, and headed of to school. When Nadia arrived she saw her friends. "Nadia!" they all yelled running towards her. I know, it's short  |
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« Last Edit: February 18, 2010, 04:58:27 PM by Melly:D »
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red2001
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« Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 08:54:51 PM » |
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COOL!!!! i needz more
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Melly:D
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« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 07:10:49 AM » |
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LOl thanks
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Melly:D
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« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 07:26:41 AM » |
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Thanks more soon
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« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 07:27:37 AM » |
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Sounds good.  Can't wait to read more |
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talkin bout a revolution. //
sometimes there just isn't enough rocks. |
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shannybanny
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i love this pic
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« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 01:32:22 PM » |
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toooooooooooo many vampire storys
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shannybanny
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i love this pic
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« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 04:12:24 PM » |
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he he pineapple
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Melly:D
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« Reply #9 on: February 08, 2010, 04:14:32 PM » |
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Uhh don't spam
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« Reply #10 on: February 08, 2010, 04:22:00 PM » |
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Great blurb |
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There's a corner of your heart for me. There's a corner of your heart just for me. I will pack my bags just to stay in the corner of your heart. Just to stay in the corner of your heart...♥
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Melly:D
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« Reply #11 on: February 08, 2010, 04:23:09 PM » |
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Thanks Simone
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« Reply #12 on: February 08, 2010, 04:23:36 PM » |
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Your welcome.  |
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There's a corner of your heart for me. There's a corner of your heart just for me. I will pack my bags just to stay in the corner of your heart. Just to stay in the corner of your heart...♥
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« Reply #13 on: February 08, 2010, 04:37:56 PM » |
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yeah well that is not spam i do not call he he pineapple spam
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Melly:D
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« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2010, 04:42:52 PM » |
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« Reply #15 on: February 11, 2010, 04:08:18 PM » |
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Yay! That's fab!
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 ive fallen for your eyes but they dont know me yet. |
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« Reply #16 on: February 18, 2010, 04:50:55 PM » |
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Wow!! Mel that's a great story except it's a little short. Can't wait to hear more! |
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♥ falling stars don't crash through your window, if you want it, go get it, it's meant to be chased. All your scars won't heal, til you let go. You're perfectly worth it, forget your mistakes ♥ |
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Melly:D
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« Reply #17 on: February 18, 2010, 04:53:01 PM » |
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Adding more
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« Reply #18 on: February 18, 2010, 04:55:36 PM » |
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Ok. Cool. Oh and personally I think that you should call it Dark Secret not Dark Changes. |
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♥ falling stars don't crash through your window, if you want it, go get it, it's meant to be chased. All your scars won't heal, til you let go. You're perfectly worth it, forget your mistakes ♥ |
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« Reply #19 on: February 18, 2010, 04:56:03 PM » |
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Yay!
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ive fallen for your eyes but they dont know me yet. |
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« Reply #20 on: February 19, 2010, 04:20:53 PM » |
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I just read Chapter One. I love it! It's soooo good! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. |
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♥ falling stars don't crash through your window, if you want it, go get it, it's meant to be chased. All your scars won't heal, til you let go. You're perfectly worth it, forget your mistakes ♥ |
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« Reply #21 on: February 19, 2010, 04:26:54 PM » |
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Cool
Can u read my story?
It's called The Scorpions of Ayla
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Melly:D
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« Reply #22 on: February 23, 2010, 07:02:51 PM » |
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It was actually supposed to be called Dark Secrets  |
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