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Author Topic: Scary- tell me what you think! not for the easily scared  (Read 154 times)
Rani_B_Bear
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« on: February 07, 2010, 10:00:52 PM »

Mariah Stepped off the patio. she chewed at her cuticles.
'bored, bored, gee am I bored.' Muttered Mariah. maybe i'll play with the hose...hm.Nah. She thought, and jogged around the yard, around and around. Then she decided to explore under the house. Mariah crawled under the patio, and was under the house with junk, dirt and fleas that wouldnt stop nipping her. Mariah found a toy recorder, some broken bits of plastic, and a teddy bear way beyond repairs.

Mariah crept around until she saw that the concrete rose up, with a huge gaping hole of darkness showing. She could hear deep breathing. what? thought Mariah. She peered into the darkness. Then she heard a heart thumping. She could see sunlight filter into the hole from the outside past the planks of wood along the side of the house. Mariah peered further into the hole then a loud shhhhhhhKAAAAAA! erupted from the hole, it echoed as a hoarse whisper. Then a ghostly white face with cracks in it, Orange coloured eyes and red bloodshot lines in its iris'. The face was shaped like a baby's. 
"coooooo...ARAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" the deathly creature SCREECHED. Mariah screamed shrilly,
"AGGGGGGGGhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhAAAAGGHA" she screamed even harder, then Mariah's lungs were empty, she scrambled, trying to stand up in the crawl space, then hit her head really hard, then her eyes rolled back in her head, and she collapsed into the dust of the floor in the crawl space. the creature's lizard-like tongue was exposed, and its fang-like, razor sharp teeth bit Mariah's big toe.

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« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2010, 06:40:27 AM »

Thats pretty freaky.  Lips sealed
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« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 07:36:59 AM »

Very freaky Lips sealed

I LIKE IT. :O

Plase write more Cheesy
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« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 03:21:54 PM »

It's good!
I don't get scared by reading something, so i wasn't scared Tongue
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« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 04:22:38 PM »

Great story mate
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« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 06:29:47 PM »

Thanks Melly:D,
Deanne, thats what i want =D
Tamsyn, I definitely will write more, just you wait  Grin Grin Grin
thank you too, poniesrule
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Mariah woke up in bed, feeling like a truck had crashed into her, and backed over her a few more times.She looked around her small room. not much to say for it. She rolled over and met eyes with Pumpkin the beanie kid, reverse edition, so his eyes were orange.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Mariah shrieked, tried to run out, but she was too weak. She fell to the floor, sobbing like a baby. Mariah's Mum Gabby rushed in, saying "My honey, oh whats wrong?" she asked, frightened, as she scooped Mariah in her arms.
"Shhh...its Okay now, dont worry..." Gabby said soothingly.

Mariah had lay in her mothers arms on the bed, with wide eyes and a crumpled face.
"Mum...Mum...help...mum..." she whispered. Her Mother had shushed her, and told her to go to sleep. Mariah slowly slumped in her mothers arms, falling asleep. hours later, Mariah woke up on the couch, so her mother could keep an eye on her. Gabby was in the toilet so she went into the garage and found...
her long lost father's construction clay!!

Mariah's father had left a long time ago and had left his construction work materials and tools. She Grabbed it all, and ran outside, in her night-gown. She crept over to the side of the house and left the construction stuff there. Mariah snuck back inside and went to her room and read books (and stuffed Pumpkin in the cupboard), until her mother said goodnight. She waited an hour, then went outside. She had grabbed shoes, a flashlight, and of course, her mothers BB gun. Mariah hoped it had bullets. Gabby kept both items in separate places for safety. She grabbed the hardened clay, and quietly turned the hose on, and splashed water on the massive hunk of Clay. She then tiptoed (tiptoed as hard as she could in crawl space) back to the scene of the crime (by this time, Mariah still hadnt noticed her toe) and played with the clay as if it were dough. She pulled and pushed and kneaded. finally she pulled the whole lot over the hole, and used the imprint of the BB gun to tighten the seal of the clay. Then, exhausted with fear, Mariah crawl back out, and went inside. She put everything back, and slept badly, with nightmares.
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The next morning she was pale, groggy and looked really awful. Gabby gave her daughter a look, as she stirred her tea.
"You didnt read too late, last night, did you?...Hey! you still havent told me what happened yesterday!" Gabby said, look suspicious.
"I, Um, I think I saw, um, something that wasnt there...Just my imagination..." Mariah lied, staring at her white feet.
"well, okay, but I dont like you going down there." Gabby frowned, still looking suspicious. Mariah nodded and had her toast. At about 1:00pm, Gabby got dressed.
"Hon, I have to work. Are you going to be okay here by yourself?" Gabby asked. Gab was a real-estate agent, and even worked on Saturdays like this day. Mariah nodded.
"Sure, mum. Want me to cook dinner tonight?" she asked.
"oh, dont strain yourself, sweetie. You hit your head hard. I'll see you later." said Gabby, then she kissed Mariah on the head and she was gone. Mariah went again into the crawl space. she shuffled along then froze in a crouch. The construction clay had disappeared, all that was left was a few orange-y scratches around the hole.........
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                 TO BE CONTINUED........



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« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 07:16:55 PM »

OMG! Shocked
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« Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 07:27:06 PM »

OMG! Shocked
THanks!!  Grin Cheesy Grin Grin Cheesy Kiss
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« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 07:30:36 PM »

Thats k. (:
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goodbye.
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