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Hey Guys, Guess what I Won and tomorrow I will get my prize......wonder what it will be!!Hi Guys I gave it in the teacher didn't see over 35 words 
Winners anncounced tomorrow, wish me good luck!  At school we have a book preview comp and I need to give in tomorrow and just asking is it good. AND I need it less than 35 words but still fantastic. HERE PREVIEW: ( taken some off )Tap. Tap. There it is. My heart starts beating louder than my music. Ruby is a thirteen year old girl who has a special gift. Last time she helped someone it was quite difficult but now she has to help a whole family. Can Ruby help this someone in need? Read this mystery book Ghoust with a Message by Mary K.Pershall to find out! Please Help MaDI  p.s. sorry for caps..........................not shouting. |
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« Last Edit: February 22, 2010, 07:31:49 PM by beanie love »
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 "I heard it. A voice. Your voice, Hermione. You said my name. Just my name… And I knew the ball of light was going to take me where I needed to go." -Ron Weasly, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2010, 06:52:10 PM » |
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PLEASE gonna die here
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"I heard it. A voice. Your voice, Hermione. You said my name. Just my name… And I knew the ball of light was going to take me where I needed to go." -Ron Weasly, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2010, 06:59:55 PM » |
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I like it. =]
It makes me wanna read the book. xD
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beanie love
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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2010, 07:01:29 PM » |
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thanks
the only thing i need is to get it under 35 words
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2010, 07:03:18 PM » |
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Oh, that might be difficult. =|
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Waiting, just waiting for the right guy to come plodding along... <3 |
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« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2010, 07:24:41 PM » |
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I know your offline, Madi. But I think it's great! The only thing you need to think about is your spelling, though.  |
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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2010, 07:25:41 PM » |
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hey thanks
but what about my spelling?
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« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2010, 07:37:46 PM » |
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anyone plz help?  |
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2010, 07:52:12 PM » |
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hey thanks
but what about my spelling?
I'll show you.  Tap. Tap. There it is. My heart starts beating louder than my music. I hid under my quilt shivering. Ruby is a thirteen year old girl who has a special gift. Last time she helped someone it was quite differcult difficultbut now she has to help a whole family. Can Ruby help this someone ineed in need or don't care? Read this mystery book Ghoust Ghost with a Message by Mary K.Pershall to find out! I put the correct spelling besides the incorrect word in bold. It's excellent now but you just need to get it under 35 words...  |
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« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 08:46:49 PM » |
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its great..
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« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2010, 08:01:53 AM » |
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thanxs
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« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2010, 04:25:03 PM » |
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I gave it in guys and the library teacher luckily didn't see over 35 words  |
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« Reply #12 on: February 18, 2010, 04:07:00 PM » |
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Thats great Pm me please!
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« Reply #13 on: February 18, 2010, 04:07:42 PM » |
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thanks
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« Reply #14 on: February 22, 2010, 07:32:11 PM » |
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Hey Guys I won!!!!!
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« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2010, 09:03:39 PM » |
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Congratz |
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« Reply #16 on: February 23, 2010, 04:56:58 PM » |
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Congratz thanks for being the first on here |
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« Reply #17 on: February 23, 2010, 05:58:18 PM » |
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Congratulations |
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« Reply #18 on: February 24, 2010, 04:45:25 PM » |
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Thankies |
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« Reply #19 on: February 24, 2010, 04:46:20 PM » |
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gratz |
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« Reply #20 on: February 25, 2010, 04:00:23 PM » |
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thankies |
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« Reply #21 on: February 27, 2010, 10:56:03 AM » |
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What was your prize? Oh, and congratz. |
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