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Question: Which is better?  (Voting closed: February 26, 2010, 04:39:53 PM)
Poem - 3 (27.3%)
Story - 8 (72.7%)
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« on: February 12, 2010, 04:39:53 PM »
decided to enter the story. (:
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« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 04:42:35 PM »
They are both really good Dee!
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« Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 04:44:01 PM »
Thanks. C:

But which one is better? xD Thats what I need to know.
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« Reply #3 on: February 12, 2010, 04:45:14 PM »
Uhmm,
I like the story better.
Not saying the poem isn't good,
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« Reply #4 on: February 12, 2010, 04:46:31 PM »
Love the poem!
As I already told you. Tongue
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« Reply #5 on: February 12, 2010, 04:47:03 PM »
Quote from: Melly:D on February 12, 2010, 04:45:14 PM
Uhmm,
I like the story better.
Not saying the poem isn't good,
Ok, thanks.
Quote from: Billy96 on February 12, 2010, 04:46:31 PM
Love the poem!
As I already told you. Tongue
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Thanks Billy. xD
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« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2010, 06:12:21 PM »
I like the story.
Its good.

Cassie.
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« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2010, 06:20:13 PM »
Dee's trying to get us to vote for which division she'll enter in Write4Fun
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Short Story.
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« Reply #8 on: February 12, 2010, 06:42:59 PM »
Quote from: Supersmartan on February 12, 2010, 06:12:21 PM
I like the story.
Its good.

Cassie.
Thanks. =D
Quote from: cherrib on February 12, 2010, 06:20:13 PM
Dee's trying to get us to vote for which division she'll enter in Write4Fun
lol
Short Story.
How did you know? :O
Do you stalk me or something? =O
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« Reply #9 on: February 12, 2010, 06:49:21 PM »
Quote from: deanne on February 12, 2010, 06:42:59 PM
Thanks. =D

How did you know? :O
Do you stalk me or something? =O
Nah, I'm jsut good Tongue
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« Reply #10 on: February 13, 2010, 08:40:08 AM »
Lol. Tongue
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« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2010, 04:23:46 PM »
Some reasons why I like the story better.........

1. I say that poem didn't really rime ( don't know how to spell)
2. You're better at story writing
3. the story is so good because I just wanna read more
4. grammer and all words were fantastic


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« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2010, 07:21:19 PM »
Madi, just a heads up; poem's don't need to rhyme Wink
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« Reply #13 on: February 18, 2010, 08:07:01 AM »
Quote from: cherrib on February 17, 2010, 07:21:19 PM
Madi, just a heads up; poem's don't need to rhyme Wink
ohhhhhhh well I love the poem then Tongue
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« Reply #14 on: February 19, 2010, 03:13:04 PM »
Quote from: beanie  love on February 17, 2010, 04:23:46 PM
Some reasons why I like the story better.........

1. I say that poem didn't really rime ( don't know how to spell)
2. You're better at story writing
3. the story is so good because I just wanna read more
4. grammer and all words were fantastic


GREAT WORK  Cheesy
Haha, poems don't need to rhymne, as Rob said. xD
Thanks. C:
Well you can't. Tongue
Thanks. Cheesy
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« Reply #15 on: February 20, 2010, 10:53:30 AM »
removed poem/story.
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