Beanie Kids Forum - My Story - Blurb & Chapters - Needs Name

Hello, this is my first ever story I've put on the bkf, so please give me some positive feedback and advice. It doesn't have a name yet, so if you think you have a good name for my story, please tell me.

Blurb:
Olivia's best friend is moving to another country, her mum just had her baby brother (well, half brother) and now her uncle has been murdered! How will poor Olivia cope? And will she ever find the murderer!?

Chapter One:
"Waaaahhhhh!! Waaaahh!" Olivia woke up to the sound of her baby brother (well, half brother) crying. She rolled over, to see the time on her digital clock. It was only 7:00. And it was Saturday! Olivia sighed. She liked sleeping in on Saturday mornings. She had better go and see her little brother, because nobody else would. Her Mum and older sister Emily wouldn't because they were both still asleep and were the heaviest sleepers Olivia knew. Her other sister Megan couldn't because she was at her friend Amy's house for a sleepover. Olivia slowly stood up, yawning. She stuffed her feet into her fluffy white slippers and trudged over to her baby brother Jai's room. Her 2 month old brother was in his cot, crying loudly and kicking his legs. His face was bright red. Olivia carefully picked Jai up and cuddled him. "Shhhh Jai. It's OK," she said softly. But Jai just kept on crying.

Chapter Two:
Suddenly Olivia heard footsteps coming towards Jai's room. She held her breath. Oh, it was just her Mum. Her Mum's blonde hair was all fluffy, her silky black nightie was crumpled and she kept yawning and rubbing sleep out of her eyes. "Morning sweetie," her Mum said. "You're up early this morning." "Jai woke me up crying," Olivia replied. Olivia's Mum took baby Jai and Olivia went downstairs to get her breakfast. She popped a peice of bread in the toaster, then poured herself a glass of orange juice. A minute or two later her Mum and Jai came downstairs. Jai was no longer crying and was looking around happily. As Olivia's Mum settled down to give Jai his bottle of baby milk, Olivia asked her "would you like a cup of coffee?" "Yes, please," her Mum replied. "A cuppa would be lovely." Later on when Olivia's Mum had finished feeding Jai and began sipping her coffee and Olivia was eating her peanut butter toast, Emily came downstairs. It looked like she had just got out of the shower. She was wearing her jeans and blue top with a picture of a butterfly on it. Her hair was still damp and tied back into a neat ponytail.

Chapter Three:
The weekend past quickly and soon it was Olivia had to go back to school because it was Monday. It was pure chaos in her house. Olivia's family were rushing around like mad. "Mum, Jai's nappy is wet!" Olivia called out. "Are we allowed to wear nail polish to school?" asked Megan. "I forgot to do my homework!" Emily groaned loudly. Olivia's Mum took Jai away, to change his nappy. "No, I don't think you're allowed to wear nail polish!" her Mum called back. "Well, you'll have to tell your teacher and do your homework tonight Emily." Five minutes later Olivia's Mum said, "You girls better be ready for school or we'll be late!" "Wait, Mum, I still have to put my shoes and socks on!" Cried Olivia. "I have to brush my hair," said Megan. "And I'm still writing a note to my teacher, telling him why I didn't do my homework," said Emily. A minute or two later, everybody was ready for school.

Chapter Four:
When Olivia got to school, her best friends Tahlia and Rosie didn't run up to her to say hi like usual. Instead they were sitting down under the shade of a big leafy tree, looking sad. Olivia wandered up to them. "Hi, guys, what's wrong?" She asked. Rosie looked up. Olivia noticed that Rosie looked a sight. Her face was white and she had dark circles under her eyes. Her eyes were red and her nose was yucky and snotty. Poor Rosie looked as if she had been crying. But before Olivia could ask Rosie what the matter was, the school bell went and Olivia, Tahlia and Rosie had to run inside to class.

Chapter Five:
Finally, after a long hard maths test, it was recess. Olivia quickly grabbed her hat and snack, then ran outside. Tahlia and Rosie were right behind her. "Rosie, tell me what's wrong!" Olivia pleaded. "Tell me now - please!" Rosie just shook her head. "Not now," she whispered. "Not here, not with everyone else watching and listening. Let's go to the back of the oval." So the three best friends trudged across to the back of the oval. They sat down in the long grass and Rosie began to tell Tahlia and Olivia what was wrong. "Well, yesterday when I came home from school my Mum was on the computer looking at different houses. I just though that my Mum was helping my older cousin Emma, because she is looking for a small house to move into with her boyfriend. Anyway, I started playing Hide 'N' Seek with my little brother. When my brother got bored, I was going to call you Olivia to ask if you were coming dancing next week, but my Mum was on the phone, talking about the prices of houses. Again, I thought it was for Emma. So, I decided to get started on my english homework. When I finshed, my Mum called me for dinner. While my family and I were eating dinner, my Mum said she had something to tell us." Before, Rosie could continue a little girl with red hair and freckles walked up to us.