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« on: February 20, 2010, 03:39:20 PM »
Part 1
Young Soul

Chapter 1
The story of a element guardian

Rachelle quickly wrote the writing on the chalkboard,which was tonight's Arithmancy homework.Rachelle was an Aurora Guardian,attending Malisica Academy for Young Guardians,her special skill was reading the aurora borealis or Northern Lights.Unfortunately,a Aurora Guardian's hardest subject is Arithmancy.Too bad her best friend,Hannah's(who is a Sprirt Guardian)best subject is Arithmancy.
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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2010, 09:57:50 AM »
Please?
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« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2010, 09:59:36 AM »
Thats really good Caity. Altough......Its sorta hard to understand.
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« Reply #3 on: February 21, 2010, 10:22:13 AM »
Yea,i no it's weird
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« Reply #4 on: February 21, 2010, 10:26:49 AM »
No its not weird
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« Reply #5 on: February 21, 2010, 10:37:07 AM »
For someone who has no idea what you're talkimng about, it only sort of made sense.

I suggest making an Epiloge. An Epiloge is something that happened before the beginning of your story, that makes your story either flow better, or that makes it easier to understand.

If I were you, I'd write how the Auora Guardiens evolved. And what they're lives are about. (:
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« Reply #6 on: February 21, 2010, 10:47:33 AM »
ditto Dee!
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« Reply #7 on: February 21, 2010, 10:51:01 AM »
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« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2010, 10:52:56 AM »
Yea,I no what a Epilogue is
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