Poem Making

[beanie love]

Hey Guys,

I wondering if someone could teach me how to do poems.
If there was a certain way you do it or anything. So if you
could teach me please pm me and post here.


Madi


p.s.
Please VOTE

[beanie love]

anyone?

[beanie love]

please can anyone even show me their poems?

[Keke1]

please can anyone even show me their poems?

What u need to focus on is the rhyming.
It fits together if u put rhuming words in.
You've read my poem so try and imagine more.

~Keely~

[beanie love]

What u need to focus on is the rhyming.
It fits together if u put rhuming words in.
You've read my poem so try and imagine more.

~Keely~

Thanks

I'll Try

[beanie love]

It's so light today,
I might just go out to play,
it might slightly rain but I'll go on to play

Is that good?

[deanne]

Poems don't need to rhymne I wrote this poem:



Would You?

If I told you how I felt, would you understand?
If I asked for your help, would you give it to me?
If I told you my feelings, would you give them a second thought?
If you saw a tear trickle down my face, would you wipe it away?
If you heard me crying, would you comfort me?
Just because I’m invisible, doesn’t mean I don’t have feelings
I need to be noticed, but nobody does.
If I screamed in the night, would you come running to help?


It doesn't rhymne, but the message in it is still as clear as it would have been if I had made it rhymne.

Poets tend to rhymne poems to make people remember them, to make them catchy.

[Keke1]

It's so light today,
I might just go out to play,
it might slightly rain but I'll go on to play

Is that good?

OMG!
It's great.
Just maybe rewrite it to this,
It's so light today,
I might go just go out to play if it's that way,
It might rain like they bay but i'll be happy and go on to play.
hope it helps,
~Keely~

[beanie love]

Poems don't need to rhymne I wrote this poem:



Would You?

If I told you how I felt, would you understand?
If I asked for your help, would you give it to me?
If I told you my feelings, would you give them a second thought?
If you saw a tear trickle down my face, would you wipe it away?
If you heard me crying, would you comfort me?
Just because I’m invisible, doesn’t mean I don’t have feelings
I need to be noticed, but nobody does.
If I screamed in the night, would you come running to help?


It doesn't rhymne, but the message in it is still as clear as it would have been if I had made it rhymne.

Poets tend to rhymne poems to make people remember them, to make them catchy.

Thanks for the tips

[beanie love]

Thanks Keke1



Sorry don't know name

[Keke1]

Thanks Keke1



Sorry don't know name

Nanes Keely

[beanie love]

Name's Keely

okay Keely

[deanne]

Thanks for the tips

np.

[beanie love]

 

[moneekie14]

Well, i do it like this.


The first line is going to be the future ryhme,
The second line is rhyme-free,
And the third line has a rhyme like time,
and the last line has none.


Then go onto another paragraph. Hope that helps!

[deanne]

Not all poems rhyme.

Actually, the most famous poems in the world don't rhyme.

[beanie love]

Well, i do it like this.


The first line is going to be the future ryhme,
The second line is rhyme-free,
And the third line has a rhyme like time,
and the last line has none.


Then go onto another paragraph. Hope that helps!

thanks

[beanie love]

Not all poems rhyme.

Actually, the most famous poems in the world don't rhyme.

Do you like the one I sent you dee?

[002560]

the last words have to rhyme if you want it to rhyme like this
I wish I wish I could go out to play
but no but no its raining today
I wonder I wonder what I can do
but theres nothing for me or you!
Like it

[deanne]

they don't have to rhymne.

[cherrib]

They're not listening

[deanne]

I'm not allowed to talk to you.
So shut up.

[cherrib]

If I was talking to you, I'd probs tell you that if I didn't know you, that would hurt me. but I do know you so it doesnt

[deanne]

If I was talking to you, I'd say, lol.

[Frenchieee]

even in a poem you have to change the speling