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Author Topic: A Christmas Surprize.. By Natasha  (Read 74 times)
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« on: March 20, 2010, 02:20:17 PM »

A Christmas Surprize
Chapter One

Once there was a girl called Lilly. She luved in the little town of Ammelina. She luved with her adoptive parets, Ryan and Maggie. She lived in not a one story, two story but a three story house with er other fourteen adoptive sisters and brothers. Seven children were older and the other seven children were younger than her. Their names are for the oler children: Adam, Samantha, James, Jessica, Scott, Caity and Dean. And the younger children: Jack, Sophie, Tom, Eli, Zac, Zoe and Sam. She was the middle one. The oldest Adam was 15 down to her who is 8 then right down to Sam who was the newset adopted and just newly born.

Chapter Two
One night they were all getting ready for bed and Jack said
"I really wish my parents were here right now.."
Then a huge bang and everyone of them ran out on the verhanda. Ryan yelled out
"Go back to bed.. I've got it under control."
And every one went back inside to bed. Lilly loved to investigate. All the girls loved the colour pink and were all girly girls.. except Lilly. Lilly loved going out with Ryan to help feed the animals and she loved the country. She was not liek veryone else.
Lilly went out to investigate. She said
"What happened Dad?" as she closed the back door.
"Oh... I"   He said" I have been making things and the  last thing i made blew up.. not to bad though." he said.
Lilly hoped on the ground and helped her Dad clean up.
Chapter Three
She walked to school every morning with her friends Klara, Ebony and Natasha. TAll four of them were great friends. One day they were wlaking to school and a cute guy walked past. Lilly wasn't watching where she was going and tripped over. The guy helped her up and help gather up all her books
He said " Here you go.." handing Lilly her books" Um.... are you OK?"" he said looking confused. Lilly sighed a long sigh and said " Yeah I'm good thanks. I'm L:illy and you are..?"
"Lucus" he said " I'm new to this school"
His face was a slight tan with chocolate brown eyes. He smiled the smile that would make your heart melt because it was so sweet.

Chapter four

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« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2010, 02:25:38 PM »

Natasha Natasha Natasha

What a lovely story I love it soooo much
Cant wait for the rest YAY looking forward to that

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« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2010, 02:26:56 PM »

Need some new names
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« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2010, 02:31:06 PM »

Yeah some new names should be good
Maybe you could add some more describing words -JUST AN IDEA

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