(teperary name) Never Again- By Ashleigh. Please Read =) it's not long =D

[puppie_rock45]

This Story is Copyright!
If you have an Idea for what i should call it, be my guest =)
Also i would love an edited version of this story =D

Life hadn't got much better, People kept telling me to forgive myself because it wasn't my fault but it was, if i had just been there, if i hadn't been worrying about my own problems and took his to heart, he wouldn't be dead, i was the cause of my brothers death.
Oh God did i miss him, i remember when we were younger we would play games and do all these fun things, but then i faded away, i was more concered about what other people thought of me, people teased me about playing with my brother so thats what i did, i stopped, i started to be mean to him and act like i hated him, what a stupid thing to do. He is gone because of me, he was only 15, he shouldn't have died so young, i should have not been so blind to his problems, i was a year older, i should have been there and listend but i was just to stupid.
He came up to me and told me he was under depression and was cutting himself, i had laughed and told him he was just doing it for attention and to get over it, and the next day i found him in my room, i didn't know what he was doing, and i pushed him out of my room and told him i hated him, that day when i came home from school, my parents were crying, my brother had comited sueaside, i never stopped crying.

I hope you like it, and please comment, and also, if you like to edit things please do! =D
Ashleigh.xx

[Dani_The_King_Of_Crocs]

Thats pretty good ash, just make sure when you say 'I' Make sure it is a capital

[puppie_rock45]

Thats pretty good ash, just make sure when you say 'I' Make sure it is a capital

I know that Dani, i just couldn't be bothered.

[Dani_The_King_Of_Crocs]

 

[puppie_rock45]

Anyone else?

[puppie_rock45]

 

[puppie_rock45]

Will anyone post what they think?

[Dani_The_King_Of_Crocs]

Write more!!!!

[puppie_rock45]

LoL Dani, How do you spell sueaside??

[Dani_The_King_Of_Crocs]

suicide?

[puppie_rock45]

Yush! Tanx Dani!


No One else cares

[Dani_The_King_Of_Crocs]

spread the word around ash!! then people will come!

[scorpiobear_luva1]

omg, i nearly cried! nice story, though!

[puppie_rock45]

omg, i nearly cried! nice story, though!

Thank-you

[anna97]

awww
that soooooooooo good

[puppie_rock45]

awww
that soooooooooo good

Thank-you Anna

[anna97]

you know
with that you should write the bro's version and the mums and adad version
if you get me

[puppie_rock45]

you know
with that you should write the bro's version and the mums and adad version
if you get me

Yeah That's a really good Idea
And in fact, i will
making now The bro's version.

[puppie_rock45]