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« on: April 03, 2010, 02:33:59 PM » |
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This is a short story that came up at the top of my head.
The start:
I got out of bed this morning and I saw there was a dog standing in front of my window. I hadn't seen it before. I walked to the window and looked at the dog. It was a scary dog although it looked cute. I got scared because the dog looked at me like it was spying on me. I ran down the stairs and had breakfast. When I went outside after breakfast I saw the dog still sitting in front of my window. I then thought it was a statue. I got a bit closer and reached out to touch it. The dog felt my movement. It turned to face me. I quickly pulled my hand back scared it might bite me. I stood there looking at the dog for a few seconds before I turned around to leave. As I did so th dog started barking. I didn't expect it so I started running. The dog chased me and I ran and ran like my life depended on it. As I ran the dog kept chasing me until I ran into a wall. The wall belonged to a house I have never seen before. I stepped back one step to have a look at the house. It was big just like a mansion. The dog was behind me and started pushing against my leg like it was trying to tell me to go inside. I turned to face the dog, kicked it softly to let it know to go away. When it finally left I turned and walked home. The next morning the dog wasn't at my window.
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melovebeanies
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« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2010, 11:47:54 AM » |
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cool!
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Annie cheese
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« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2010, 02:06:21 PM » |
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Awesome
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I don't belong here, I gotta move on dear <3
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« Reply #3 on: April 05, 2010, 02:37:09 PM » |
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« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2010, 04:20:40 PM » |
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naomi0698
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« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2010, 04:30:31 PM » |
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THanks
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« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2010, 05:24:33 PM » |
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great
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naomi0698
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« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2010, 06:06:54 PM » |
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Thanks
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Annie cheese
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« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2010, 07:58:10 PM » |
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What does that mean? If your being mean to Naomi I may have to tell a Mod. |
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I don't belong here, I gotta move on dear <3
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« Reply #9 on: April 06, 2010, 04:21:20 PM » |
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a dog was lookign throguh your window?
then Yo uran down stairs?
OMG ITS CLIFFORD THE BIG RED DOG!
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naomi0698
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« Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 10:23:32 AM » |
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I made this up at the top of my head
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naomi0698
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« Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 12:36:32 PM » |
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Thanks
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« Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 12:50:41 PM » |
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geat job! (:
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naomi0698
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« Reply #14 on: April 08, 2010, 01:33:05 PM » |
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Thanks
I also wrote another story
In My story, Please comment
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« Reply #15 on: April 08, 2010, 08:29:42 PM » |
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What does that mean?
If your being mean to Naomi I may have to tell a Mod.
i'm not I'm jeleous |
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naomi0698
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« Reply #16 on: April 09, 2010, 11:56:18 AM » |
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Why are you jealous
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zig_zag_man
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« Reply #17 on: April 09, 2010, 02:28:16 PM » |
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i can't right like that
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naomi0698
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« Reply #18 on: April 09, 2010, 02:36:37 PM » |
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RIght WEll you can draw much better than me
Come check out
THe ATTACK, please comment
Or My story, please comment
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Annie cheese
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« Reply #19 on: April 14, 2010, 05:34:00 PM » |
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Wow this is a good story
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I don't belong here, I gotta move on dear <3
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« Reply #21 on: April 14, 2010, 07:34:40 PM » |
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how is that spam?
I was jelous,
coz I can't wright like that.
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« Reply #22 on: April 19, 2010, 05:21:04 PM » |
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good story
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« Reply #23 on: April 19, 2010, 05:28:44 PM » |
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What does that mean?
If your being mean to Naomi I may have to tell a Mod.
Donts say ill have to id say i Will say it to monertator |
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naomi0698
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« Reply #24 on: April 20, 2010, 08:35:49 AM » |
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thnkas everyone
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