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« on: April 06, 2010, 08:51:41 AM »
Title: My First Mystery



Chapter One: 'Are you ready for this Lubella?' Asked Peter, the cheif of the police force. 'Yes, I'm ready,' I replied. 'Are you sure? This is a very serious crime and it will take a well trained detective and many police to find the culprit.'
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« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 08:52:29 AM »
Do you like my story so far?
I'll post more of Chapter One later.
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« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 08:20:45 PM »
Ooh!
I ♥ mysteries! I'll read it!
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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2010, 04:40:52 PM »
I love mysteries although sometimes they get me scared for the character
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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2010, 05:09:47 PM »
Thanks guys.
I luv mysteries too. I'll ppost more to my story soon. Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2010, 06:19:41 PM »
cool
It sounds exciting
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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 07:42:44 PM »
More more more!
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« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2010, 08:04:28 AM »
I am writing more now. Sorry, I haven't added anything for a long while. I had a bad case of writer's block. Tongue
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« Reply #8 on: April 13, 2010, 08:09:12 AM »
Still Capter One: Sorry, I still haven't introduced myself, how rude! My name is Lubella Crafter. I have been training for many years and finally I am part of the police force. Today my dear friend Peter Wood, who is the cheif policeman told me about a very serious crime. Somebody had stolen the Queen's crown!! My job was to find out who stole it. I had to start my job right away.
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« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2010, 08:14:49 AM »
Shocked

Poor Queen!

This reminds me of 'The Queen's Handbag'.

Anyway, keep going Annabelle!
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« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2010, 08:16:33 AM »
I know. The Queen is very upset.
LOL.
I'll probably post more tommorow, because I don't have enough time right now. Smiley
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« Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 08:17:47 AM »
Ok.
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« Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 08:18:19 AM »
I've got to go now. Bye! Kiss
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« Reply #13 on: April 13, 2010, 03:55:06 PM »
more plz
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« Reply #14 on: April 14, 2010, 07:36:37 PM »
Quote from: B.K B.K B.K on April 13, 2010, 08:18:19 AM
I've got to go now. Bye! Kiss
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« Reply #15 on: April 14, 2010, 07:47:36 PM »
Go Annabelle!!!
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« Reply #16 on: April 15, 2010, 08:07:56 AM »
here is some more. Wink

Chapter Two: A  car took me over to the palace where the Queen lived. The crown had been stolen from a glass case. I went over to look at the case. It was very tall and the glass, was very shiny, it looked as if somebody had just polished it. In the middle of the case, there was a wooden shelf. On the wooden shelf there was a purple velvet cushion with gold tassels. The Queen's crown usaully sat on that cushion when the Queen wasn't wearing it. But the crown was not there. Then I realised that the back of the glass case was smashed! There was glass everywhere and a small man in a smart uniform was busy cleaning it up.
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« Reply #17 on: April 15, 2010, 08:22:29 AM »
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« Reply #18 on: April 15, 2010, 08:23:25 AM »
I have to go now. I'll write more later. Wink
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« Reply #19 on: April 15, 2010, 08:27:20 AM »
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« Reply #20 on: April 16, 2010, 09:53:42 AM »
Chapter Three: I introduced myself to the small man. Then he told me that is name was Joseph, but I could call him Joe. Joe worked for the Queen. 'Joe, did you see or hear anything suspicious the night the Queen's crown got stolen?' I asked him. Joe shook is head. 'No, I heard nor seen nothing. I was too busy sleeping', he replied. So, I decided to leave Joe to is work. Instead I started looking for clues. I pulled out my magnifying glass and had a good look around. Suddenly I spotted...
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« Reply #21 on: April 16, 2010, 04:26:02 PM »
:O

ANNABELLE KEEP GOING!

What did she spot?!
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« Reply #22 on: April 17, 2010, 10:50:05 AM »
She spotted...
I'll tell you soon. Grin
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« Reply #23 on: April 20, 2010, 08:38:41 AM »
Oh please some more
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« Reply #24 on: April 20, 2010, 06:33:22 PM »
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