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« on: April 13, 2010, 06:40:47 PM » |
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Anybody ever had to do one? I know what will be your first thought... Oh my gosh! Is she serious! Fifty words only?!  Or maybe you won't. That might just have been me when my teacher explained to us...  But has anybody done one? If you have I guess you can post them here. They're like normal short stories, they're just usually five sentences long. >.< |
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TaylahND
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« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 06:43:23 PM » |
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50 words!! That would be so hard. My stories and assignments go over the word limit almost every time and thats when they're high.
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polar cola
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« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 06:44:53 PM » |
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50 words!! That would be so hard. My stories and assignments go over the word limit almost every time and thats when they're high.
It is hard. Especially when you get 51 words. o.0 Bahaha, sometimes I find it hard to reach the amount of words, sometimes I go over it easily. |
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natbear
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« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 06:51:18 PM » |
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Anybody ever had to do one? I know what will be your first thought... Oh my gosh! Is she serious! Fifty words only?! Or maybe you won't. That might just have been me when my teacher explained to us... But has anybody done one? If you have I guess you can post them here. They're like normal short stories, they're just usually five sentences long. >.< Yeah, i did two last year, I think I posted them, I'll go find them. (: |
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« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 06:52:45 PM » |
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First One.
As I quickly ran onstage I wondered what could possibly go wrong. Well, I could fall over and break my ankle or forget the dance moves. But I didnt need to stress, I knew my dance by heart. Then suddenly I relised the music had started and I wasnt dancing.
Second One.
As my favourite song came on the radio I began to scream at the top of my lungs. My brother and his friends all stared at me. ''Maniac'' my sister said rolling her eyes. My mother just grinned widely showing all her teeth. I was totally gonna be a star.
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polar cola
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« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2010, 06:54:12 PM » |
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First One.
As I quickly ran onstage I wondered what could possibly go wrong. Well, I could fall over and break my ankle or forget the dance moves. But I didnt need to stress, I knew my dance by heart. Then suddenly I relised the music had started and I wasnt dancing.
Second One.
As my favourite song came on the radio I began to scream at the top of my lungs. My brother and his friends all stared at me. ''Maniac'' my sister said rolling her eyes. My mother just grinned widely showing all her teeth. I was totally gonna be a star.
Awesome, Nat!  I'll post mine later, it's at school actually. xD |
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« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2010, 09:40:41 PM » |
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the stories are pretty good. have you done any pola colaz?
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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2010, 09:18:51 AM » |
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I found it hard to write a ghost story for that ghost story comp. And that was 150 words When ever i write a sdtory I write like four pages  |
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« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 04:28:32 PM » |
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Gah. I cant do short stories anymore. Ever since I began reading novels, I have a lot of trouble writing short stories.
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« Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 04:42:00 PM » |
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Once upon a time there was a Tam. She loved a penguin; called Bam.
Tam loved V, and V loved bees.
One day, Tam saw some V, she drank it excitedly.
YUM YUM she thought
Then she had a fright, “AGGGGGGGGGHHHHH” she said, and ran away. It was a bee.
kay it be fifty words my LT says :]
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TaylahND
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« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 04:55:40 PM » |
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It is hard. Especially when you get 51 words. o.0 Bahaha, sometimes I find it hard to reach the amount of words, sometimes I go over it easily. When I can't reach the limit I try to add more and end up going over. We're doing short Short Stories at the moment though and theres no word limit its just as much as you think you can write in the space given. Which is like 70mins I think. |
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« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2010, 04:58:59 PM » |
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We do these things when you can't think of anything else to write you just keep writing the previous word
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Steffanythebridebear
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« Reply #12 on: April 14, 2010, 05:11:31 PM » |
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Here's one.
She sat on the beach with her crush. Earlier he asked her out and she said yes. She was happy and it felt like a dream for them both. As the sun started to set they both stared into each others eyes. There lips finally met as a dolphin jumped.
THERE!
Exactly 50 words
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polar cola
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« Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 05:14:22 PM » |
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I'll post mine soon(:
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« Reply #14 on: April 14, 2010, 05:54:02 PM » |
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Here's one.
She sat on the beach with her crush. Earlier he asked her out and she said yes. She was happy and it felt like a dream for them both. As the sun started to set they both stared into each others eyes. There lips finally met as a dolphin jumped.
THERE!
Exactly 50 words
I like that one |
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polar cola
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« Reply #15 on: April 14, 2010, 05:55:54 PM » |
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Here's one of mine. Elsie took a step forward and tightened her grip on hair brush. “I’m armed!” she cried, turning rapidly around in all directions. But there was nobody there, only herself. She looked around again, hoping she wasn’t going insane or something. “Weird,” she muttered. Suddenly, Brandon jumped out of the wardrobe. |
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« Reply #16 on: April 14, 2010, 05:58:01 PM » |
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Haha LOL Sacha
You don't even need to tag it to know it's yours
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« Reply #17 on: April 14, 2010, 06:03:17 PM » |
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Haha LOL Sacha
You don't even need to tag it to know it's yours
rofl |
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polar cola
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« Reply #18 on: April 14, 2010, 06:11:26 PM » |
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Haha LOL Sacha
You don't even need to tag it to know it's yours
What's that supposed to mean? xD I usually write about people using hair brushes as weapons? xD |
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Mr. Tambourine Man.
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« Reply #20 on: April 14, 2010, 06:13:23 PM » |
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Yes, I attempted to do a 50 word story once, but, ended up with about 60 words. |
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polar cola
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« Reply #21 on: April 14, 2010, 06:13:58 PM » |
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Yes, I attempted to do a 50 word story once, but, ended up with about 60 words. You just cut it down until it's 50. xD I guess so.........
Whoa, I never would have known. 0.0 |
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« Reply #22 on: April 14, 2010, 06:18:02 PM » |
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Yeah, but it didn't make sense if I did that. It was a bit of a...well...I suppose morbid story. |
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polar cola
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« Reply #23 on: April 14, 2010, 06:20:00 PM » |
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Yeah, but it didn't make sense if I did that. It was a bit of a...well...I suppose morbid story. Ah, okay. I don't know what morbid means. xD |
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« Reply #24 on: April 14, 2010, 06:25:59 PM » |
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Like, it's a bit sad, a bit dark, dreary, y'know. |
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