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LaurenEV
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« on: May 31, 2010, 07:25:39 PM »

This is my story beginning, hope you like it
The boy wearily trudged through the bushes and fell to the ground amongst them. He was tried after his hours of searching. More than hours,actually, it had been days, weeks, possibly even months, but he didn't know exactly. He had been here for so long he didn't care any more.
The task he was given seemed easy at first, but he now realised it was almost impossible. Find the sword, he was told, and he will be free. But there was another option. One he hadn't considered until now.
He heard a voice. It swept across the maze like spilt milk, and hit him like a cold wind.
“Do you give up now?' the voice said. The boy turned to the direction of the voice. He couldn't see who had spoken, but he didn't need to. He knew the voice as well as he knew himself.
He looked to the sky and sighed. He never thought he would say this, but there was nothing else he could do.
'Yes” the boy whispered. “I give up”
A laughter echoed though the maze, and a strong wind came rushing towards him. The last thing he heard was the voice laughing as loud as thunder, and in a minute, the boy was gone.
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horsechick95
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Moved back to old account poniesrule


« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2010, 07:54:22 AM »

Thats great Smiley
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