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Author Topic: Love in the Shadows - A story by me.  (Read 84 times)
Luna_Ripple
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« on: July 07, 2010, 12:46:04 PM »

To start off this isnt a true story.
I was bored. I did use my name, yes, but it isnt me. And below I wrote my own version in my notebook.
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All incorrect puntuation is meant to be there (:



Typed Version;
When I looked at you my heart skipped a beat and I pinched myself because I thought you were a dream. Then I realised you were real and that you would give me a chance. So the next day I walked right up to you. You smiled at me and I was stunned. So, to make you think I wasn't stunned, I muttered a few words to you then said, "& yeah, I think I... I.... I love you."
After that you left me. You didn't come to school for atleast 2 months. Everyone tried to convince me you were overseas, but I couldn't believe them.
In October you came back. When you walked through the school gates I tried to hide but you ran after me.
"Ebony," you said as you turned me around by my shoulder. "I shouldn't have left you. I couldn't stop thinking about you. It made my heart ache to know that you loved me and I wasn't there for you. But you know what? I believe in love now. You helped me. You're irresistible to me."
After that you stared deeply into my eyes as if you were trying to tell me something. And then that's when I knew our love would blossom into something magical. "I will forever love you," you murmured.
I looked at my feet. To know I was irresistible to someone like you was amazing. But if I said anything, I could've hurt you. I didn't want to take that chance, so all I said was: "This isn't a dream is it?"
You shook your head and laughed. "It's 100% real. I love you and I know you love me."
But, when I went to smile your face was cast with shadows...

<3

I hope you like it and if you insist I will type more (:
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« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2010, 02:59:02 PM »

OMG. I think I just fell in love with your story! Loll
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« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2010, 03:49:29 PM »

lol thanks xD
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« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2010, 05:18:34 PM »

This is good. Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2010, 08:39:31 AM »

i love this story, ebb. Cheesy
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« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2010, 08:51:02 AM »

it's really good.
Your really creative with words. Wink
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« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2010, 03:55:46 PM »

brrrrilllannntt
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« Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 08:30:47 AM »

awesome as a curly pigs tail! Tongue
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« Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 07:05:32 PM »

cool
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