Beanie Kids Forum Beanie Kids Forum
Welcome, Guest. Please login.

Login with username, password and session length
News: Login to the BK Forum using your BK Fan Club username and password! If you're not a Fan Club member already, click here to sign-up.
Pages: [1]   Go Down
« previous next »
Print
Author Topic: The Murder at Noon -a poem by me  (Read 92 times)
katec
Beanie Superstar
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 22470
« on: August 07, 2010, 03:10:43 PM »
Some of you may not think its very good but my friends love it and told me to tell it on the BKF. I made it last year when I had free writing and one of my friends came up to me and said: "hey kate, write a poem with Kevin Rudd in it"
So you may not like it or you may take offense at it, but I don't really see the harm in it.

There once was a man who made a motion
That would cause quite a commotion
His task was to murder someone
Whose identity was know to no-one
T'was a brutal murder to be done at noon
On the eve of the full moon
So at noon the murderer stalked his prey
And shot him dead near the bay
As the murderer tripped over with a thud
His identity revealed to be Kevin Rudd



Hope you like it!!! And please post your comments on this poem.
« Last Edit: August 08, 2010, 10:53:13 AM by katec » Logged
Moved on.
Bundle-Of-Fun
Beanie Ninja
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 67379


happy forever day nermy army! (:
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 03:12:24 PM »
That is a really good poem!
Kept me very entertained!
Logged

ive fallen for your eyes but they dont know me yet.
katec
Beanie Superstar
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 22470
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 05:25:56 PM »
thanks Cheesy i have heaps more Cheesy my friends really like my poems and they think i should publish a book of poems.
Logged
Moved on.
horsechick95
Beanie Legend
*****
Offline Offline

Posts: 1564


Moved back to old account poniesrule
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2010, 06:47:35 AM »
That is........












FANTASTIC.
Logged
Bucky
Ultimate Beanie
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 5581


CREEPERBOOM!
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2010, 10:04:51 AM »
hahahha and now hes going to kill julia gillard for ruining his life!
Logged
GONE-HUNGER-LIES-PLAGUE-FEAR-LIGHT <3
katec
Beanie Superstar
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 22470
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2010, 10:52:56 AM »
hehehehehe. glad you all like it Cheesy
Logged
Moved on.
katec
Beanie Superstar
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 22470
« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2010, 10:53:53 AM »
Maybe the person whose identity is known to no-one could be Tony Abbott?
Logged
Moved on.
InTheClouds
Beanie Superstar
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 24031
« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 08:58:36 PM »
Cool as Poem Smiley
Logged
"Don't worry, I'll be there, just like every other time."
 ♥
zig_zag_man
Beanie Professor
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 8657


tricorn - for the win!


WWW
« Reply #8 on: August 14, 2010, 11:51:22 AM »
awsum
Logged

liblib101
Beanie Professor
******
Offline Offline

Posts: 7530


I am a BP and a BELIEBER! Gabby 'N' Nat <3
« Reply #9 on: August 14, 2010, 12:14:08 PM »
outstanding
Logged
I <3 1D, CS, JB
Love the forum like it was the last day on earth!
Pages: [1]   Go Up
Print
Beanie Kids Forum > General Discussion > Creative Board > Topic: The Murder at Noon -a poem by me
 « previous next »
Jump to:  

Powered by SMF 1.1.16 | SMF © 2011, Simple Machines