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« on: August 14, 2010, 12:11:42 PM » |
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 It was quiet as I walked down an old allyway. I was on a mission. A mission to retrive enemy secrets. I came to a slow as I reached the end of the allyway. Why would they send me here? I started scanning the brick walls around me. I stopped. My hand moved slowly towards a new looking brick, newer then the others. I pushed hard on the surface of the brick and the whole wall slid open. The tunnel way was brightly lit. I took a step towards the tunnel. CLANK! I looked down at the floor. It was no longer made of concrete, it was made of metal. I walked through the tunnel not knowing where it lead to. "great a dead end" I sighed. I looked up towards the metal wall and squinted. Up on the edge of the tunnel roof was a small symbol reading: T.S.A I smiled.
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« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2010, 12:13:36 PM » |
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I LOVE CHARMED!!!!
I am playing Piper anyday!
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« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2010, 12:20:29 PM » |
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Thanks
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« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2010, 12:37:31 PM » |
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writing more soon!
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« Reply #4 on: August 14, 2010, 12:38:54 PM » |
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« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2010, 12:39:19 PM » |
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Awesome. I started the spy craze.
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The Tribe <3 Tahlijah. <3 Elijah and Tahlia <3

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« Reply #6 on: August 14, 2010, 12:39:51 PM » |
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well you were the one who gave me the idea! THANKS
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« Reply #7 on: August 14, 2010, 12:41:01 PM » |
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Happy reading bye
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« Reply #8 on: August 14, 2010, 12:48:37 PM » |
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well you were the one who gave me the idea! THANKS
Thats okay. I love spies.
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« Reply #9 on: August 14, 2010, 04:11:10 PM » |
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same
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« Reply #10 on: August 14, 2010, 04:24:16 PM » |
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Wow, that was fantastic! You should write more, you have a talent! I was seriously in it, and really want to read more x]
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« Reply #12 on: August 14, 2010, 07:03:20 PM » |
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 I stood infront of a large metal wall wondering how to get into the new HQ. I took a step towards the door thinking there may be some sort of test, 'H-O-L-D S-T-I-L-L' boomed a robotic voise. There was a loud whirring noise coming from the wall, as I stepped back a part of the wall slid back to reveal a small pannel with the numbers 0 to 9 written on the buttons. 'E-N-T-E-R Y-O-U-R C-O-D-E' boomed the voice, code? what code? I thought hard about what 'code' could mean. "Is it my name in phone code?" I asked, I pressed the numbers 3, 7, 4, 6 then ENTER. 'I-N-V-A-L-I-D C-O-D-E' boomed the voice, "Oh my gosh! how hard is it to find just one code?" I said in fustration. PING! I slipped my phone out of my pocket and entered the access code hold on, my phone access code!. I put my phone back in my pocket and entered my phone access code into the code pannel, 'A-C-C-E-S-S G-R-A-N-T-E-D' boomed the voice. A door that would be unnoticable unless you knew where it was clicked and then slid open, I peered into the room and walked inside.
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« Reply #13 on: August 14, 2010, 07:51:01 PM » |
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Do you guys like it
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« Reply #14 on: August 14, 2010, 08:18:46 PM » |
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« Reply #15 on: August 14, 2010, 10:04:35 PM » |
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awsome!
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« Reply #16 on: August 15, 2010, 05:02:32 PM » |
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Thanks
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« Reply #17 on: August 15, 2010, 06:21:33 PM » |
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 The room was brightly lit with a giant screen at the end of the room. I slowly walked in, the only sound was the sound of my foot steps. Hold on, I stopped and listened, footsteps? but I'm not walking! I ducked behind a cabnit, I held my breath and waited. I peeked out from behind the cabnit, an old man walked in turned off the lights and locked the door behind him. I sunk back into the cabnit and sighed with relief. I walked over to the screen, in the dim light it was hard to see but with the light from the screen it was fairly easy to see. I pressed a button that looked like a map, as it loaded I played with a braclet that my grandma gave me. Quickly, the app opened and showed a map of the whole HQ, there was a door next to so I checked to see what it was, kichen hey. I walked across to the door, as soon as the door slid open I was in shock of what I saw.
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« Reply #18 on: August 16, 2010, 04:24:06 PM » |
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like it?
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« Reply #19 on: August 19, 2010, 04:56:06 PM » |
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more please
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« Reply #20 on: August 20, 2010, 06:48:11 PM » |
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Oh Yeah
Please don't just post more more more I need positive and negitive feedback. If you continue to nag me you'll be reported
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« Reply #21 on: August 22, 2010, 06:03:49 PM » |
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SORRY happy now
Naomi don't say that or you'll be banned
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« Reply #22 on: August 22, 2010, 06:05:00 PM » |
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Can you just please keep writing
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« Reply #23 on: August 22, 2010, 06:05:43 PM » |
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No not now
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« Reply #24 on: August 22, 2010, 06:08:28 PM » |
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SORRY
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