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« on: August 29, 2010, 07:01:27 PM »
Hello everyone,
I'm making a story, called 'Watching me'.
WARNING, MAY BE FRIGHTENING FOR YOUNGER MEMBERS! REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT A TRUE STORY!

It is about a girl, who's parents died, and she doesn't know how. She lives in an orphanage, and always feels someone is watching her. Little does she know, she is correct...

I've started the story, the proluge is below on this page, and it will go on.
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« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 07:36:47 PM »
Sounds Good Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 08:02:09 PM »
Ohh Sounds scary

Not as scary a PA
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« Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 08:23:08 PM »
sounds cool
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« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2010, 08:34:59 PM »
kool (: dont let my friend read it Tongue
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« Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 06:37:13 PM »
Go Anita!
Can't wait to read it!
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« Reply #6 on: September 01, 2010, 08:17:44 AM »
Sounds awesome, but scary. Can't wait to read it. Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: September 13, 2010, 07:20:41 PM »
Well, here we go:

-PROLOUGE-
Mia stood in the bedroom of the orphanage, 12 beds on each side of the long room, no-body in there except her. She had a strong feeling someone was watching her, and she couldn't bare it anymore. She had had it for as long as she could remember. Mia was over it, and wanted to know why she had the feeling. She crept down the walkway inbetween the rows of beds, holding a candle to see where she was going. Mia made it to the cupboard, hoping that inside it there may be something, or even, someone there. Shakily, she grabbed the dusty doorhandle, and turned. She pulled the door forward, and she screamed in horror, frozen with fear...
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« Reply #8 on: September 13, 2010, 07:33:20 PM »
I'm scared! Embarrassed

Great Story.. but very scaring..

I wanna teddy to hug... Tongue
Actually i dont.. Teddies are evil... Just like the one of toy story 3 Embarrassed Sad
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« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2010, 07:40:01 PM »
Quote from: abby_99 on September 13, 2010, 07:33:20 PM
I'm scared! Embarrassed

Great Story.. but very scaring..

I wanna teddy to hug... Tongue
Actually i dont.. Teddies are evil... Just like the one of toy story 3 Embarrassed Sad
Aww, sorry if I scared you Sad
Just rmemeber, this isn't real.
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« Reply #10 on: September 13, 2010, 07:40:33 PM »
Awesome Story Smiley Love it.
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« Reply #11 on: September 13, 2010, 07:40:55 PM »
omg i cant read this sorry v:)
it sounds great !
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« Reply #12 on: September 14, 2010, 07:22:08 AM »
Ooh, gosh, the last sentence sent a shiver through me.
That's great writing! Cheesy
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« Reply #13 on: September 14, 2010, 08:33:00 AM »
I Love It! Cheesy
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« Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 04:43:41 PM »
Wow thats great!!! how old are you?  Cheesy
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« Reply #15 on: September 14, 2010, 05:08:33 PM »
Quote from: 1_2_3_4_5 on September 14, 2010, 04:43:41 PM
Wow thats great!!! how old are you?  Cheesy
I'm 11, turning 12 in November :]
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« Reply #16 on: September 14, 2010, 05:32:48 PM »
-CHAPTER ONE-
Mia sat on her hard bed, bed number 6. She had always hated the orphanage, she always dreamed of living in a beautiful cottage with a mum, a dad, sister and brother. She had wished it all her life, seeing as she had never remembered her parents. They had died shortly after her birth, and she had been brought up in the orphanage, and she never liked it. The workers there are horrible, and they never liked Mia. Just because when Mia was a baby, she was a loud and cryed a lot, always wanted attention type baby, they thought she would never change. They always expected she always wanted attention, because she used to be brave enough to ask for a serviette, unlike any of the other girls at the orphanage. "Still the same as she was. Hasn't changed a bit." Ms. Matthews would say, sticking up her nose and strutting around the place. Her best and only friend, Ms. Jenkinson worked there too. She would follow exactly what Ms. Matthews would do. They always hated Mia. Always.

Mia didn't have any friends at the orphanage except Katie. Katie had been there since Mia was 5, and had been friends since. Mia didn't see Katie often, because Ms. Matthews always tried to keep them away from eachother. Ms. Matthews hated Mia having fun, and thought keeping her away from her friends would teach her manners...


Sorry, I've got to go and have dinner, I'll write more laterr :]
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« Reply #17 on: September 14, 2010, 06:53:05 PM »
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« Reply #18 on: September 14, 2010, 06:59:11 PM »
I <3 it
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« Reply #19 on: September 15, 2010, 05:51:26 PM »
thanks x]
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« Reply #20 on: September 15, 2010, 06:33:09 PM »
Thats great! Cheesy
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« Reply #21 on: September 23, 2010, 07:08:20 PM »
Why thank-you Grin
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happy forever day nermy army! (:
« Reply #22 on: September 24, 2010, 11:28:02 AM »
ROFL Tongue
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« Reply #23 on: September 24, 2010, 07:10:30 PM »
More?

I am so at the egde of my seat right now, can't wait for more :]
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« Reply #24 on: September 25, 2010, 10:05:22 AM »
More!

heyy cool Im in the story (Katie)
Its Like the story of me and my BFF My evil Teacher Mrs Garraway would all was seperate us to try teach us what she thought good behavour  Tongue

I LOVE IT

The prologe scared me but its awesome!
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