ok so this is the first bit of chapter one. Tell me what you think of it please and i respect any opinion good or bad
Chapter one
I have a priviliged life. I have over 3 billion dollars in my bank account, a mansion of my own and a career as an actress. I have been in over 9 movies and am currently starring in the tv series 'mega star'. The show is about a 16 year old girl who thinks she has it bad, until her school gets a surprise vistor, Mary Allenstar. Mary Allenstar is a director. So that's my life.
Lexi! Stop sitting around and start getting ready for school! My dad yelled. Yes, I am an actress who has to go to a public high school.So I searched my mansion for my yellow Porsche. Suddenly my phone rang.
Hello, Jack. I said looking at the caller ID. Jack was my best friend.
Hey. Do you think you can drive me to school again? He asked.
Sure, but what's wrong with your car?
Um... it's kind of at the mechanic. He mumbled.
OK. Well be here in five minutes ok?I said.
That'll be easy. I only live 5 doors up remember? How could I forget he moved last weekend!
Yeah I remember. Bye.
Bye see you soon. He hung up.
We arrived at school. I heard laughs. I turned to look where the laughs were coming from. They were coming from Milly's group and they were pointing at me!
I didn't know it was inside- out and wrong way around day. Milly said with a look on her face that anyone could pass of as sweet.
I didn't know that having you're boyfriend breaking up with you was considered cool. Jack said saving me from bad humiliation again. Milly and her grouped just walked away in disgust.
Thanks. Can you let me borrow your jacket so I can put them on the right way please? I asked.
Sure. That was Jack always helping me.
I got into the change rooms of the gym. I realised that I left my bag in my car. I called Jack and asked if he could get my bag out of my car because he had a key, too. I walked out of the change rooms and walked into someone.
I am so sorry. I said looking up and realising that the person I walked into was new because her face was blank and pale as if she had never seen a girl before.
You're Lexi Idas. Oh my god. You're like my role model. She said still shocked and taking in my icy blue eyes and black hair.
you're even prettier in person! I'm Amanda by the way. Amanda said she wasn't to bad looking either. She had orangey brown hair and freckles. She looked like she was 11 years old.
How old are you? I asked.
I'm turning 16 in 3 days. She replied.
So am I. I said in shock.
So what class do you have first?
Photography.
That's the same as me!
Cool. If you want a friend I can be one if you want. I offered, she seemed nice.
Oh really? Thank you. She said practically jumping up and down.
Oh and thank you for saying I'm prettier in person and you're cute too. I said making her blush.
