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Author Topic: Love Bug- a romance novel by Vicky please give feedback  (Read 95 times)
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« on: September 18, 2010, 07:14:05 PM »

so i'm writing a romance novel and this is only like the first few chapters! tell me if you like it!

Love Bug- Chapter one
hi my names Lilly and i'm a freak, freak in look freak in style freak in school and freak with my grades-
wait! that's right and all but seriously! is that any way to write about myself in a journal that's meant to take stress off? NAH-AH!!!
so i was always different! i mean i admit, i'm a freak! so how am i going to start a whole new year at school, let alone high school tomorrow when i know that i'm gonna flunk! anyhow besides the point life is going to be way different! i meancan my life get any worse! how is a freak like me gonna dance my way through high school when the only thing i'm good at is dancing gonna fit in! what am i going to do? Dance my way through all the classes and become a teachers pet?? i Highly doupt that even THAT will work! i mean who am i going to sit with at lunch??? how am i even going to get a boy friend! i mean seriously, who wants to date a dancing freak like me!!
oh my god!!! i'm turning red and sweaty just thinking about it! Woops gotta go! mum just got home from the office and wants me to go shopping for uniforms! the only thing i'm not stressing about is the fact that the uniforms are awesome! it's basically casual clothes with the school symbol on it!!! more later


Love Bug - chapter 2
coming soon!
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i write romance novels! inspire me! Wink
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« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2010, 07:14:25 PM »

Sounds Awesome Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 12:11:07 PM »

I look foward to reading it,
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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 01:39:29 PM »

thnx!
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« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 01:39:56 PM »

oooh cant wait. Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2010, 02:03:38 PM »

cool! any feedback?Huh
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« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 02:12:42 PM »

Awsome. Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 02:28:14 PM »

Awsome. Smiley

omg thnx!
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« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2010, 12:42:26 PM »

i'm adding more
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