Horses Poem - By me

[Caitlin08]

I wrote this as part of class, I wanted to know what you guys thought about it:


Trotting in the breeze,
Like a bird flying in the trees.
Galloping at fast speeds,
Running; pulling out the weeds

Horses playing in the sun;
Horses having heaps of fun.
But the sun travels behind a cloud;
And the wind is blowing loud.

The horses run into the stable;
Like a kid running to the dinner table.
But the sun is out again, along with the horses;
Back to run the training courses.

Trotting in the breeze,
Like a bird flying in the trees.
Galloping at fast speeds,
Running; pulling out the weeds


Whadya think?
Stan xx

[Caitlin08]

Anybody?

[poniesrule]

I ♥ it!
Great job.

[_love_bug_]

it's good!

[Caitlin08]

Thx guys xx

[Tess96]

That is REALLY good!