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katec
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« on: September 23, 2010, 03:27:07 PM »
This is my story I'm writing and I decided, why not show you guys? So I am, but not the whole story.



-removed sneak peek-


If you want to read my story I can PM it to you when I have finished some more chapters :]
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« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 03:27:56 PM »
I thought it was rather good. Please tell me what you think!!!
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« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 03:31:00 PM »
Pretty good.
Remember to start a new line whenever there's a new speaker.
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« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 03:38:29 PM »
I know, that just happened when I pasted it in from Word Tongue I always do a new line when there's a new speaker.
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« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 03:40:23 PM »
Haha thought that might be the case, just mentioned it incase Tongue Smiley But yeah it's pretty good.
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« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 03:46:33 PM »
Thanks Cheesy There's lots of caes, want me to help you carry them? hehehe Tongue
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