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Author Topic: 'I wont let you.' - My entry to Erin's HP Fan Fic Comp.  (Read 457 times)
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« Reply #75 on: January 10, 2011, 02:05:43 PM »

I want to let out another warning again - it's cheesy and most likely bad cheesy, not good cheesy.
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« Reply #76 on: January 10, 2011, 03:35:01 PM »

Sasha,


Trying not to sound rude but stop with the cheesy warnings Tongue
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« Reply #77 on: January 10, 2011, 04:06:52 PM »

lol

i have been reading a few Angelina & George stories and have been very disappointed in them, they have 2 different story
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1. George & Angelina grieving and make a baby
2. Angelina gets pregnant with Fred's baby before he dies and George looks after her

Can't they say they fell in love in school or something -seriously Roll Eyes
That'd be an awkward conversation to have
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« Reply #78 on: January 10, 2011, 04:55:26 PM »

That'd be an awkward conversation to have
yeah some have said she went to George said she was pregnant with Fred's baby
or she hid's it from the family until after they're born
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« Reply #79 on: January 10, 2011, 05:05:30 PM »

Sounds like an intriguing story,
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« Reply #80 on: January 10, 2011, 07:14:38 PM »

Sounds like an intriguing story,
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« Reply #81 on: January 11, 2011, 07:30:40 AM »

Sorry just have to remind you  Tongue
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« Reply #82 on: January 11, 2011, 08:04:40 AM »

"Who?" asked Hermione, confused.

"The house elves!" Ron cried. "They're still down in the kitchens, aren't they?"

Harry didn't catch on. "You mean we ought to get them fighting?"

Ron figured this was unfair. They shouldn't fight unless they want to. "No, we ought to get them out!" he remembered one elf who had died in this war - he didn't want any more. "We don't want anymore Dobby's, do we? We can't force them to die for us--"

Ron had only just managed to get as far as that when he heard a clatter and saw a flash of brown before he felt the most softest and sweetest prescence on his lips. The warmth that spread through his body made him feel light headed. Then the realisation finally dawned on him. Hermione was kissing him!

Ron chucked away the broomstick and the fangs and kissed her back so fiercely he was scared she'd fall over, so he wrapped his arms around her and lifted her up. He felt the urge to be as close to her as possible, the only way she'd be safe was if she was in his arms. He'd never let anything hurt her then.

The feeling was unbelieveable. He had spent years trying to figure out exactly what kissing her would feel like, but reality was much better then anything he came up with. He didn't know it was possible for something to feel so amazing. He felt warm waves travel down his body consistently, like drinking butterbeer non stop - but this was infinite times better than Butterbeer.

He heard someone say "Is this the moment?" but Ron had forgotten how to think. He didn't know who said that and he didn't even care. He couldn't think, hear or see anything. He could only feel. He couldn't even remember where they were. He could only imagine they were in heaven. Somewhere far away, where there was no war, no death. Just him and Hermione.

He felt Hermione moan into his mouth, and he held her tighter, if that was possible. The feeling was intoxicating, he didn't want it to ever end. He just wanted to stay there, holding Hermione and kissing her, smelling the vanilla and cinnamon in her hair and---

"OI! There's a war going on!"

He felt Hermione pull away slightly. He opened his eyes, and felt as if that was the most hardest thing he ever had to do. It was like waking up from a sound sleep. He took a good look at Hermione. Her face was a few centimetres away from his, her eyes were yet to open. Her cheeks were pink, a lovely hue, and her hair was slightly tangled, and Ron could still remember the feeling of his hand in that hair. The corners of her lips were twitching and she bit her lip to hold back a smile. Her eyes fluttered open and upon seeing Ron in front of her the smile broke out. Ron realised he still had his arms around her, and her arms were still around his neck. He still felt as if he were in a daze, and he wondered how he was able to stand still.

"I know, mate," he finally answered Harry, not taking his eyes off Hermione. "So it's now or never isn't it?" Hermione went pinker, her eyes never leaving Ron's.

"Never mind that, what about the Horcrux?" Harry shouted at them, but Ron was too ecstatic to care. "Do you think you can just.. just hold it in until we've got the diadem?"

Ron and Hermione both blushed. "Yeah, right, sorry." Ron managed to say, and bent down to retrieve the fangs. Hermione joined him, and smiled cautiously at him. Ron grinned back. Then, the reality of what Harry said sunk in. There was a war going on.

"Hermione," he said in a low voice. "I'm gonna do everything I can to get you through this, and you are not going to die." I need to find out what it's like to kiss you without Harry interupting. "And I'll do my best not to die."

"You won't die." Hermione said firmly, then flashed him a reassuring smile. "I won't let you."

Ron grinned back at her.
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« Reply #83 on: January 11, 2011, 01:24:32 PM »

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« Reply #84 on: January 11, 2011, 03:37:36 PM »

aaaaaw!!! That is so sweet!!
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« Reply #85 on: January 11, 2011, 04:42:45 PM »

Thats the end Smiley
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« Reply #86 on: January 11, 2011, 05:07:13 PM »

That is the cutest story! It's amazing Sasha! ♥
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« Reply #87 on: January 11, 2011, 05:37:44 PM »

Thats the end Smiley
aaw! It was reeeeally good Smiley
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« Reply #88 on: January 12, 2011, 07:08:35 AM »

Thanks Grin  Embarrassed
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« Reply #89 on: January 12, 2011, 08:53:56 AM »

I want to let out another warning again - it's cheesy and most likely bad cheesy, not good cheesy.
tisk tisk I have hand cufed my hands for when I read it
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« Reply #90 on: January 12, 2011, 08:56:14 AM »

"Who?" asked Hermione, confused.

"The house elves!" Ron cried. "They're still down in the kitchens, aren't they?"

Harry didn't catch on. "You mean we ought to get them fighting?"

Ron figured this was unfair. They shouldn't fight unless they want to. "No, we ought to get them out!" he remembered one elf who had died in this war - he didn't want any more. "We don't want anymore Dobby's, do we? We can't force them to die for us--"

Ron had only just managed to get as far as that when he heard a clatter and saw a flash of brown before he felt the most softest and sweetest prescence on his lips. The warmth that spread through his body made him feel light headed. Then the realisation finally dawned on him. Hermione was kissing him!

Ron chucked away the broomstick and the fangs and kissed her back so fiercely he was scared she'd fall over, so he wrapped his arms around her and lifted her up. He felt the urge to be as close to her as possible, the only way she'd be safe was if she was in his arms. He'd never let anything hurt her then.

The feeling was unbelieveable. He had spent years trying to figure out exactly what kissing her would feel like, but reality was much better then anything he came up with. He didn't know it was possible for something to feel so amazing. He felt warm waves travel down his body consistently, like drinking butterbeer non stop - but this was infinite times better than Butterbeer.

He heard someone say "Is this the moment?" but Ron had forgotten how to think. He didn't know who said that and he didn't even care. He couldn't think, hear or see anything. He could only feel. He couldn't even remember where they were. He could only imagine they were in heaven. Somewhere far away, where there was no war, no death. Just him and Hermione.

He felt Hermione moan into his mouth, and he held her tighter, if that was possible. The feeling was intoxicating, he didn't want it to ever end. He just wanted to stay there, holding Hermione and kissing her, smelling the vanilla and cinnamon in her hair and---

"OI! There's a war going on!"

He felt Hermione pull away slightly. He opened his eyes, and felt as if that was the most hardest thing he ever had to do. It was like waking up from a sound sleep. He took a good look at Hermione. Her face was a few centimetres away from his, her eyes were yet to open. Her cheeks were pink, a lovely hue, and her hair was slightly tangled, and Ron could still remember the feeling of his hand in that hair. The corners of her lips were twitching and she bit her lip to hold back a smile. Her eyes fluttered open and upon seeing Ron in front of her the smile broke out. Ron realised he still had his arms around her, and her arms were still around his neck. He still felt as if he were in a daze, and he wondered how he was able to stand still.

"I know, mate," he finally answered Harry, not taking his eyes off Hermione. "So it's now or never isn't it?" Hermione went pinker, her eyes never leaving Ron's.

"Never mind that, what about the Horcrux?" Harry shouted at them, but Ron was too ecstatic to care. "Do you think you can just.. just hold it in until we've got the diadem?"

Ron and Hermione both blushed. "Yeah, right, sorry." Ron managed to say, and bent down to retrieve the fangs. Hermione joined him, and smiled cautiously at him. Ron grinned back. Then, the reality of what Harry said sunk in. There was a war going on.

"Hermione," he said in a low voice. "I'm gonna do everything I can to get you through this, and you are not going to die." I need to find out what it's like to kiss you without Harry interupting. "And I'll do my best not to die."

"You won't die." Hermione said firmly, then flashed him a reassuring smile. "I won't let you."

Ron grinned back at her.
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« Reply #91 on: January 12, 2011, 09:01:05 AM »

oh cheese oh cheese oh cheese oh cheese oh cheese.
But it's really good though oh cheese oh cheese
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« Reply #92 on: January 12, 2011, 10:05:45 AM »

tisk tisk I have hand cufed my hands for when I read it

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« Reply #93 on: January 12, 2011, 02:42:09 PM »

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« Reply #94 on: January 21, 2011, 01:22:44 PM »

CHEESE!

But it's really, really good. I love it. Smiley
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« Reply #95 on: January 21, 2011, 01:29:03 PM »

LOL thanks Annabelle
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« Reply #96 on: January 21, 2011, 01:37:08 PM »

tisk tisk I have hand cufed my hands for when I read it
So you don't lash out in cheesiness? Grin
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« Reply #97 on: January 21, 2011, 01:37:52 PM »

LOL. I'm a cheesy person. Tongue
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« Reply #98 on: January 21, 2011, 01:39:49 PM »

Lol, I know. Tongue
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« Reply #99 on: January 21, 2011, 01:40:46 PM »

Remember when I called myself fluffy? Tongue
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